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2/19/2016 c1 pyro the vixen boy
I absolutely 1000% love it I'm sold its beautiful your strongest suit as a writer I would have to say is you're amazing scale of making character development show me it was beautiful your description of scenery and settings was good and your grammar was phenomenal which is to be expected so but yeah I loved it overall I'd give it a 10 out of 10 and I can't wait to see what happens next if you decide to continue this if not I say you left it at a good point
6/22/2013 c1 3Bluegrass123
I loved it! If you ever get a chance, PLEASE make a sequel!
3/28/2013 c1 storm-lighting-wolf-starlight
i love this story you should do a seaqle
12/20/2012 c1 rewq
Don't say this is only a oneshot! This was really cute and you should make at least few chapters more! I wanna read moreeee! :D
12/17/2012 c1 214ChloboShoka
This truly is an alternative universe here. I think it was strange the way that Shinji was bidded on as if he was a prize, but the tragic past you added to Shinji makes me feel that he will be very traumatized and perhaps Ash will try and make things better for him. The ending was really cute though.

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