
10/29/2014 c1 Guest
Interesting. Odd. Why do you hate women?
jp
Interesting. Odd. Why do you hate women?
jp
9/19/2013 c1 Anon
Okay, more than a little silly (the hamster thing was cute though), and I can't believe that Beckett wouldn't know her left from her right, bu okay, we can let that go and keep going. One small issue though: I'm assuming the CVPI means Crown Victoria Police Interceptor? If so, that's hardly a small car (it's definitely full size) nor does it have a clutch (the police cars are automatics, not manuals). Sorry to be a car nerd, but those details are more than a little off.
Okay, more than a little silly (the hamster thing was cute though), and I can't believe that Beckett wouldn't know her left from her right, bu okay, we can let that go and keep going. One small issue though: I'm assuming the CVPI means Crown Victoria Police Interceptor? If so, that's hardly a small car (it's definitely full size) nor does it have a clutch (the police cars are automatics, not manuals). Sorry to be a car nerd, but those details are more than a little off.
9/17/2013 c3 Guest
perfectly amazing
perfectly amazing
9/17/2013 c2 Guest
You really do write them wonderfully
very funny too :D
You really do write them wonderfully
very funny too :D
9/17/2013 c1 Guest
Hehe I love it! Brilliantly written and very clever
Hehe I love it! Brilliantly written and very clever
5/13/2013 c3
10Mm.Mystery
This is really amusing, and definitely in character, not to mention well written. Two questions: Are they together? It didn't seem like it, but it's never specified. The second one is kind of embarrassing. What is the TD?

This is really amusing, and definitely in character, not to mention well written. Two questions: Are they together? It didn't seem like it, but it's never specified. The second one is kind of embarrassing. What is the TD?
5/12/2013 c3
3APseudonimo
Why couldn't you tell us what TD was? Now I'm breaking my brain with it! Care to share on a PM? :D :D
Loved the chapter, worth the wait and the bugging :D

Why couldn't you tell us what TD was? Now I'm breaking my brain with it! Care to share on a PM? :D :D
Loved the chapter, worth the wait and the bugging :D
1/4/2013 c2
5laurenrules334
This is awesome. This seems a lot more in character. I really love this story! Can't wait for more (:

This is awesome. This seems a lot more in character. I really love this story! Can't wait for more (:
1/4/2013 c2 Lily1725
It's kinda OOC but it's so funny I don't care about it. Keep writing!
It's kinda OOC but it's so funny I don't care about it. Keep writing!
1/4/2013 c1 Guest
LOL the hamster and the roundabout part had me laughing hard. Nice story
LOL the hamster and the roundabout part had me laughing hard. Nice story
1/4/2013 c1 randomind22
So delightfully cute!
So delightfully cute!
12/17/2012 c1
5laurenrules334
Ha-Ha, this is hilarious, but a little bit out of character for Beckett... I honestly think she would know her left or right, but that is just me;) But really good writing.

Ha-Ha, this is hilarious, but a little bit out of character for Beckett... I honestly think she would know her left or right, but that is just me;) But really good writing.