
2/10/2013 c3 The Arsenal
Shit.. Naruto's meet erza... And she's suffering mental breakdown... Damn...
Shit.. Naruto's meet erza... And she's suffering mental breakdown... Damn...
2/10/2013 c3
1Impstar
I hope that you decide to update this again sooner, it really is an intriguing story. You've left me wondering just what their relationship is.

I hope that you decide to update this again sooner, it really is an intriguing story. You've left me wondering just what their relationship is.
2/10/2013 c3 slatedfox
Ok I am a little confused. Naruto is using the name Kyuubi which means nine tailed however the werefox only has six tails. Just confused with that should you not use Rokubi which means six tailed? I did enjoy the chapter so hope to read more
Ok I am a little confused. Naruto is using the name Kyuubi which means nine tailed however the werefox only has six tails. Just confused with that should you not use Rokubi which means six tailed? I did enjoy the chapter so hope to read more
1/21/2013 c2 firedragoonknight
Another amazing chapter for the pairing u made it more like naruerza thing but its your choice but y not have both erza and mira be with naruto and also is naruto still a ninja or somthing else what about jiraia is he still his godfather
Another amazing chapter for the pairing u made it more like naruerza thing but its your choice but y not have both erza and mira be with naruto and also is naruto still a ninja or somthing else what about jiraia is he still his godfather
1/21/2013 c1 firedragoonknight
Amazing this the best story i havent read one as good as this in a while also will there be others like garra, bee, or yugito in these story or r they dead like the garud said
Amazing this the best story i havent read one as good as this in a while also will there be others like garra, bee, or yugito in these story or r they dead like the garud said
1/10/2013 c2 SpeeDemon
Well I have to say that both chapter were good. One thing don't go the Harem route if you do change the pairing.
Well I have to say that both chapter were good. One thing don't go the Harem route if you do change the pairing.
1/8/2013 c2 Guest
I admit a naruto x mirajane is good but looking back a t the past with naruto and Erza it's clear they care for each other before whatever happend and it would seem cruel to take that away from her so I vote for a naruto x Mira x erza but your story man you write what you want can't wait to read more
I admit a naruto x mirajane is good but looking back a t the past with naruto and Erza it's clear they care for each other before whatever happend and it would seem cruel to take that away from her so I vote for a naruto x Mira x erza but your story man you write what you want can't wait to read more
1/9/2013 c2 silver uli
sogui that was awesome dude i love naruto dark mode i just love his actitude but sincerile y want naruto x erza or maybe just maibe naruto x erza x mirajane but is only my opinion i will follow this story very closely pd:sorry for my bad inglish im from mexico and i dont have mastered inglish but hey hello from mexico
sogui that was awesome dude i love naruto dark mode i just love his actitude but sincerile y want naruto x erza or maybe just maibe naruto x erza x mirajane but is only my opinion i will follow this story very closely pd:sorry for my bad inglish im from mexico and i dont have mastered inglish but hey hello from mexico
1/8/2013 c2
8KitsuneDragon
Woah this story sounds awesome. I can't wait to see what will happen next and you revealed so much yet so little at the same time. What is the past of naruto and erza. How did he turn into a demon? What the hell is going to happen is beyond me and it is exciting. I hope you update soon.

Woah this story sounds awesome. I can't wait to see what will happen next and you revealed so much yet so little at the same time. What is the past of naruto and erza. How did he turn into a demon? What the hell is going to happen is beyond me and it is exciting. I hope you update soon.