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6/11 c1 Harry Malfoy9397
Unreadable.
2/16 c1 SonicHeroXD
Holy shit. You really tried to half-ass on making this one block of a paragraph that I don't want to read, huh?

This must mean you are wrong about your seamstress grandmother and mother. For shame on you being wrong!
1/14/2019 c1 2Yoko-Kiryuu Bikutoria Kurama
Yes go Harry!
1/10/2019 c1 Ironc
Danke für das schreiben, hast du noch eine Fortsetzung dazu.
Den es schreit grade zu nach Fortsetzung, schreibe bitte weiter so.

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This has been translated with the help of Google:

Thanks for writing, you have a sequel to it.
It's just screaming for sequel, please continue writing like that.
11/6/2018 c1 Nargelz
TBH the trial cancelled its self out an adult hearing for underage magic
6/12/2018 c1 4seldombites
A bit rushed, and spent way too long on something that turned out to be irrelevant to the story (flute), but a good premise, nonetheless.
3/10/2018 c1 Bos
Please continue
8/17/2017 c1 1setokayba2n
Not bad I suppose
12/24/2016 c1 JustMe
Harry you are my spirit-animal -
6/19/2014 c1 thunder18
Great chapter Update soon
5/1/2014 c1 Kariza
Nice
2/5/2014 c1 3doubledamn
Nice.
2/3/2014 c1 Guest
Good story except for 2 things:
The spelling. You don't make a flute out of would you make it out of wood.
The grammar/structure. Paragraphs should be more broken up.
Other than that, you've got a really good story here.
10/4/2013 c1 9AllieOfGreenGables
Sorry, why *wouldn't* you want a magical flamethrower in the shape of a flute? Although of course it would be better to have a magical flamethrower saxophone or something along those lines in order to hit your enemies in the face with the fire rather than the person standing next to you.
7/15/2013 c1 Guest
Awesome whiny Harry Potter just got a little less whiny and a little more kick-ass3
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