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8HarryPotterFangirl85
Interesting story. As with most good stories, I always wish there was more to it.
As a side note, I’ve been going through all of the Twilight/Harry Potter crossovers and I’m coming to the conclusion that I should just write my own one of these days, since most of the lengthy ones I have found have not been exactly what I’ve been looking for. But I guess I should finish my current story/series before I jump into something different.
8HarryPotterFangirl85Interesting story. As with most good stories, I always wish there was more to it.
As a side note, I’ve been going through all of the Twilight/Harry Potter crossovers and I’m coming to the conclusion that I should just write my own one of these days, since most of the lengthy ones I have found have not been exactly what I’ve been looking for. But I guess I should finish my current story/series before I jump into something different.
8/9/2018 c2 nessiesmith2012
So whoever the dad is, is a terrible parent. It doesn't say her age just that she is "a young girl" than "little girl" so that makes me think younger than 12. cause it was "young woman" not to mention her childish " I want to go home" after tripping. So to let a kid that is obviously clumsy if she trips over a flat surface (are you mimicking bella) out by themselves could have ended differently if someone wasn't nearby to see her trip and bang her head. This feels so forced that its irritating. I can not stress the irritation over your introduction to you clumsy character.
So whoever the dad is, is a terrible parent. It doesn't say her age just that she is "a young girl" than "little girl" so that makes me think younger than 12. cause it was "young woman" not to mention her childish " I want to go home" after tripping. So to let a kid that is obviously clumsy if she trips over a flat surface (are you mimicking bella) out by themselves could have ended differently if someone wasn't nearby to see her trip and bang her head. This feels so forced that its irritating. I can not stress the irritation over your introduction to you clumsy character.
12/24/2012 c4 26Fi Suki Saki
Wow! this is good! XD
I love this type of crossover!
I saw something I like! when Teddy meet Jacob!
26Fi Suki SakiWow! this is good! XD
I love this type of crossover!
I saw something I like! when Teddy meet Jacob!
12/21/2012 c4 Guest
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12/20/2012 c4 Guest
A vere different short story but I liked it !
Any way for your work I give you: One Gold Star.
Hope to see more one day soon.
The Crimson Mage.
P.S: Hope you have a happy x-mas and a new year !
A vere different short story but I liked it !
Any way for your work I give you: One Gold Star.
Hope to see more one day soon.
The Crimson Mage.
P.S: Hope you have a happy x-mas and a new year !
12/20/2012 c4 77blueskybuzz
I like the idea of using the new potters and teddy ; it being set after the battle . I hope you continue to post. I'm now excited!
I like the idea of using the new potters and teddy ; it being set after the battle . I hope you continue to post. I'm now excited!
12/20/2012 c4 1TwilightEclps
With magic the Potter's can make them look like they have aged, or maybe they can move to an all magical village that's not so bad.
:)
1TwilightEclpsWith magic the Potter's can make them look like they have aged, or maybe they can move to an all magical village that's not so bad.
:)