for Sigh9/23/2015 c1 
59Vaccinium Oxycoccos
This isn't very much of a thing.
While it's instantly recognizable as Tomoko, which is good, and it gets her personality and mindset down pretty much perfectly, there isn't much substance here. It's really just... nothing anyone who remotely knows the character or the series wouldn't already understand and know. Most of it is things Tomoko has nearly said word for word.
The point of the story, and I'm not sure I want to really call it that, comes across well. Sigh. But it's nothing more than an introspective we all already understand.
Also, I feel a lot like this should be one or maybe two separated paragraphs. As it is, it's practically wasted space. Makes me wonder why you bothered to write it at all.
59Vaccinium OxycoccosThis isn't very much of a thing.
While it's instantly recognizable as Tomoko, which is good, and it gets her personality and mindset down pretty much perfectly, there isn't much substance here. It's really just... nothing anyone who remotely knows the character or the series wouldn't already understand and know. Most of it is things Tomoko has nearly said word for word.
The point of the story, and I'm not sure I want to really call it that, comes across well. Sigh. But it's nothing more than an introspective we all already understand.
Also, I feel a lot like this should be one or maybe two separated paragraphs. As it is, it's practically wasted space. Makes me wonder why you bothered to write it at all.
9/28/2014 c1 KnightyNight
I can so relate to Tomoko here, no really, I can... ; RIGHT there with ya Tomoko, seriously... : Short but good poem to lovable Tomoko Kuroki. :3
I can so relate to Tomoko here, no really, I can... ; RIGHT there with ya Tomoko, seriously... : Short but good poem to lovable Tomoko Kuroki. :3
12/20/2012 c1 3Lord Grimm
I had no idea what the hell this anime was so I had to look it up, and when I did, I got the joke. It's kind of dark, but I like the new direction. Keep up the insanity Stupidfic is just not the same without you!
3Lord GrimmI had no idea what the hell this anime was so I had to look it up, and when I did, I got the joke. It's kind of dark, but I like the new direction. Keep up the insanity Stupidfic is just not the same without you!