
4/18 c1 cowlinganne
the goblin man and this story is very awesome and I am very proud of you Duaghter. Love you.
the goblin man and this story is very awesome and I am very proud of you Duaghter. Love you.
6/3/2020 c1 H.B.B
Eeeeeeeeeeeeekkkkkkkkkkk!(fangirl squeal!) I love it I love it I love it all
Eeeeeeeeeeeeekkkkkkkkkkk!(fangirl squeal!) I love it I love it I love it all
4/10/2013 c1
2Joesette
I like that. You always use the same names for the mother and father of Sarah and Jareth. Nice P.O.V. for Jareth and how he feels.

I like that. You always use the same names for the mother and father of Sarah and Jareth. Nice P.O.V. for Jareth and how he feels.
1/16/2013 c1 Guest
Must elaborate the hereafter (PLEASE)
Must elaborate the hereafter (PLEASE)
1/11/2013 c1
15TarnishedArmour
Neat reversal of perspective on the first. Curious why you didn't use Sarah's declaration/refusal at the end to counter Jareth's demands (Fear me, love me, etc.), but it works.
Another cookie for you, m'dear...
TA

Neat reversal of perspective on the first. Curious why you didn't use Sarah's declaration/refusal at the end to counter Jareth's demands (Fear me, love me, etc.), but it works.
Another cookie for you, m'dear...
TA
12/22/2012 c1 A very horny fan
Arrrgggg you people don't know what a M fic is do you! It's full of hot and steamy sex! Hot women begging to be loved, the man bitting the perfect spot and having so much fucking sex it makes you drool and want to go to bed with said person! Now this story was fluff at best is as a T and that's stretching it!
My point RATE YOUR STORIES RIGHT!
Arrrgggg you people don't know what a M fic is do you! It's full of hot and steamy sex! Hot women begging to be loved, the man bitting the perfect spot and having so much fucking sex it makes you drool and want to go to bed with said person! Now this story was fluff at best is as a T and that's stretching it!
My point RATE YOUR STORIES RIGHT!
12/21/2012 c1
5goolsbygirl
absolutely, positively, fabulous. i demand more fanfics from you. they are just excellent. write one with some lemony goodness, i think you'd be great at that.
SJSM

absolutely, positively, fabulous. i demand more fanfics from you. they are just excellent. write one with some lemony goodness, i think you'd be great at that.
SJSM