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1/13/2020 c8 16Luciendar
Hmm, at this point things are getting tedious. The way Rosario Vampire kept things interesting was by getting into the story more and all the types of monsters. Your chapters aren't really long enough to explore things. It wouldn't been much better, in my opinion, had you not used canon Naruto and had given him more abilities. Even his wind manipulation would've been something. Hell, shadow clones would've been something. As is things just feel too plain. Sorry.

Also, you obviously never read the manga or you'd realize outer Moka could never be her own existence.
11/22/2019 c18 Paul Lenzen
I really enjoyed this story and I hope that you someday finish it.
11/5/2019 c1 Otizurc
This is just small nitpicking but kitsunes can have both lightning and fire affinities. not a problem just wanted to point it out. good so far.
11/4/2019 c18 Guest
yeah you've abandoned this gatta love it when someone post one thing and does another
10/30/2019 c18 RandoFox
This story hasn't been updated in like six years. I'm a little disappointed.
10/30/2019 c17 4Arrow3ss
A rival for Ura for Naruto's heart doesn't sound like a bad idea. Don't care who (although preferably a RxV character) as long it spurs her to make her own moves
10/6/2019 c18 Guest
Yeah a temporary hiatus for 6 years and I really like this story too ;-;
8/12/2019 c18 Guest
This is a great story I loved reading about the relationships between characters; I hope you update it soon.
8/6/2019 c3 Guest
De edgyness
8/6/2019 c2 Guest



Spell check/proofread
7/23/2019 c18 ABitterPill
"Temporary hiatus"

Six years later here we are.
6/27/2019 c18 Guest
I really wish you would continue this...I really enjoy reading it and seeing the dynamics between the characters
5/24/2019 c1 15The Storm Master 567
Truly thought Hinata might try to be his friend.
2/2/2019 c7 ghoast.cc
The only major problem, as in it makes me pissed off, I have with this otherwise good fanfiction is the fact that Naruto is a complete asshole to tsukune and not telling yukari to stop causing him physical and mental trauma because I'll tell you something I learned from me being my dad's punching bag as a kid... IT'S NOT FUNNY not like you'll read this anyway
1/21/2019 c14 16Luciendar
Why do you keep calling the retrieval mission a failure? You wrote that Naruto actually brought him back but Sasuke escaped again. Not that Sasuke healing faster than Naruto really made any sense.
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