for Eternal Part IV, the Final Chapters8/4/2022 c17 
6talesmith
Love your easy going style and character portrayal. The playfulness and concern for one another is so palpable. I don’t want this wonderful read to end anytime soon. Please give us some more!
6talesmithLove your easy going style and character portrayal. The playfulness and concern for one another is so palpable. I don’t want this wonderful read to end anytime soon. Please give us some more!
1/13/2022 c2 Autumn
Enjoy the tale but Cor is more annoying than Madam T and while I like Shirley Booth, she was a dear Madam T was vexing. But u spin a good tale and other folk are dear.
Enjoy the tale but Cor is more annoying than Madam T and while I like Shirley Booth, she was a dear Madam T was vexing. But u spin a good tale and other folk are dear.
5/2/2021 c30 1Thunderhoof
Absolutely love the continuation, it's magic, and well worth the wait in between chapters. Looking forward to reading more about our fave couple and their family. So pleased to see that Jonathon and his family had grown up to, and interacting with Grandad Captain and his lovely wife. Please keep writing, it keeps us all on our toes, waiting for the next instalment. Thanks so very much for a fantastic story, as are all of the others you've written. Love'n'hugs, Skip (aka Thunderhoof)
1ThunderhoofAbsolutely love the continuation, it's magic, and well worth the wait in between chapters. Looking forward to reading more about our fave couple and their family. So pleased to see that Jonathon and his family had grown up to, and interacting with Grandad Captain and his lovely wife. Please keep writing, it keeps us all on our toes, waiting for the next instalment. Thanks so very much for a fantastic story, as are all of the others you've written. Love'n'hugs, Skip (aka Thunderhoof)
4/21/2021 c30 SB
Oh my goodness, I was so happy to see another chapter added - I've enjoyed all your writing over the years, glad to see you are continuing this story. Really looking forward to the next chapter!
Oh my goodness, I was so happy to see another chapter added - I've enjoyed all your writing over the years, glad to see you are continuing this story. Really looking forward to the next chapter!
8/28/2019 c29 Thunderhoof
Howdy Gayle, long time no see, my fault, I've been with other things, what a beaut surprise when I saw that you had written more chapters to Eternal IV. And so many of them! I last looked at Chapter 18, so I had a lovely read, and laughed at the antics of Skippy, my little namesake. I have always enjoyed reading your stories, and to find 11 chapters unread was a teriffic surprise and a most pleasurable one. Hope you are continuing to write, as I shall keep following. Hugs, Skip
Howdy Gayle, long time no see, my fault, I've been with other things, what a beaut surprise when I saw that you had written more chapters to Eternal IV. And so many of them! I last looked at Chapter 18, so I had a lovely read, and laughed at the antics of Skippy, my little namesake. I have always enjoyed reading your stories, and to find 11 chapters unread was a teriffic surprise and a most pleasurable one. Hope you are continuing to write, as I shall keep following. Hugs, Skip
7/28/2019 c28 4eaz35173
Love that Daniel found something he could put his energies in and has perked up his melancholy. Nice to see the grandkids in the pic again. Aaah, the beginnings of email. Looking forward to more.
4eaz35173Love that Daniel found something he could put his energies in and has perked up his melancholy. Nice to see the grandkids in the pic again. Aaah, the beginnings of email. Looking forward to more.
6/23/2019 c28 5B5Entilzha
Great, as usual. So good to see Daniel get something that makes him truly happy again!
5B5EntilzhaGreat, as usual. So good to see Daniel get something that makes him truly happy again!
5/19/2019 c27 B5Entilzha
Someone's getting a boooaaat! Excellent! About time he got back on the water. Looks like the sea will once again become his place!
Someone's getting a boooaaat! Excellent! About time he got back on the water. Looks like the sea will once again become his place!
5/11/2019 c26 4eaz35173
I love Cor's insights and glad to see that Daniel decided to start the conversation.
4eaz35173I love Cor's insights and glad to see that Daniel decided to start the conversation.
5/7/2019 c26 5B5Entilzha
A good question. When are we going to get the answer? I want Jonathan to leave his job before it's too late, but I know that's too much to ask. There are definite disadvantages to knowing the future, especially when you can't stop it. I really feel for the Captain here!
5B5EntilzhaA good question. When are we going to get the answer? I want Jonathan to leave his job before it's too late, but I know that's too much to ask. There are definite disadvantages to knowing the future, especially when you can't stop it. I really feel for the Captain here!
4/29/2019 c26 Barbara Bridwell
I’m a “Timeless” fan through and through. Now, I’m going to have to read what I’ve missed of this story! Awesome writing!
I’m a “Timeless” fan through and through. Now, I’m going to have to read what I’ve missed of this story! Awesome writing!
2/22/2019 c24 call2wrshp
I would very much like to hear about a final resolution to the one big hurdle left between them. What will happen when Carolyn finally passes on? Will they be forever parted, or will a way be granted that allows them an eternity together?
I would very much like to hear about a final resolution to the one big hurdle left between them. What will happen when Carolyn finally passes on? Will they be forever parted, or will a way be granted that allows them an eternity together?