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8/12/2020 c50 mercy
Great story please start on chapter 51
10/14/2018 c18 triplexxi
I have read and reread your stories countless of times throughout the years, so I've definitely noticed the changes you've made within each chapter. Although I will miss how it was originally written, I highly appreciate the improvements. It really shows your dedication. Keep up the great work!
9/13/2018 c1 Guest
You should have left this story alone. I liked it much better when Pan was Goku and Chi Chi's. You've been doing this to some other stories and it honestly feels like you're ruining them. They were done for a reason. Editing's fine, but don't change points of the plot unnecessarily.

I mean no hate, I promise. I love your stories. But please, these stories helped me through tough times a long time ago and now it doesn't feel the same when I read them
11/11/2014 c37 3winnie01
(this was so sad i nearly cried :( :(
11/11/2014 c35 winnie01
OMG OMG OMG I LOVED THIS ITS AMAZING HONESTLY
11/8/2014 c2 winnie01
loli loved it its hilarious
7/21/2014 c50 6CelesteWint3r
WOW! What should i say...another masterpiece by keitlyn.i really enjoyed the story
6/1/2014 c50 princessarmstrong
i luvved yr storie it was gr8 nd awesome
5/10/2014 c48 CC
U did it again!
5/10/2014 c47 CC
You put Bra instead of Bulla.
3/29/2014 c50 Guest
Omg! after reading serval fanfictions ( this being the very first ive ever read) i reread this, finding it to be as much of a deliate as it was the first time! i think your an amazing author! but one thing, it is impossible for identaical twins to have different genders... cells spliting and chromoses and DNA... im not going into detail! but anyway i love your stories!
12/28/2013 c35 trunks and pan
I know with is going to happen
11/28/2013 c50 Guest
best pan -trunks story i ever read...
9/17/2013 c1 2tanzany
I haven't read this story in ages! It reminds me of a lot, definitely one of my favorites!
7/21/2013 c12 saiyanprincesspan17
I started crying when pan said she was disappointed in herself
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