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for Lord of the Rings: The Journey to Living

5/18/2016 c7 2DeviousxXxSmile
I see you haven't updated since 2013. Hope you haven't abandoned this fic because I think this is one of the best and most realistic "OC falls into fictional world"-stories I've read in a long while. My only bit of critique at this point would be that I thought Daniel and Brennan accepted their reality of being unceremoniously dumped in Middle Earth far too easily. I think most people in their situation would have a more difficult time coming to that conclusion and accepting it (whether they're hardcore LOTR fans or not).
But that is a small detail and I think you've done a great job so far. This chapter was especially heart wrenching and I'm dying to see how the relationship between Brennan and Narghaash unfolds.
7/21/2013 c7 9Malady335
Well that escalated quickly. Its not a bad thing but it was definitely a shock. I'm really liking your story and I'm excited to see how she will do in Edoras. Please update soon.
5/18/2013 c6 shadow1real
I can't wait for more
5/18/2013 c1 shadow1real
Amazing opening
5/5/2013 c2 LostOne1775
Ooooo! Now I have to see what happens next!

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