for Take Two Round Two5/19 c48 kishinaract
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS more plot and more torment of naruto amidst hinatas spheres of suffering! thank you third fang and im sorry it took me this long this year to circle back and find the new chapter! delicious food for my addiction to your fanfictions
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS more plot and more torment of naruto amidst hinatas spheres of suffering! thank you third fang and im sorry it took me this long this year to circle back and find the new chapter! delicious food for my addiction to your fanfictions
3/31 c48 tomasmarcolini
Do you plan doing a fanfiction about ate grand order, following this paralelo world?
Do you plan doing a fanfiction about ate grand order, following this paralelo world?
3/30 c35 Shin Shin Tanren
not to be a dick or anything, but there absolutely is a number that exists that could accurately represent the number of sentient lives lost. it's the maximum number of sentient lives in a universe multiplied by a little over 5,000 which means you add three orders of magnitude and multiply by five.
I mean we know how many particles there are in the universe with in plus or minus 10 orders of magnitude so there's less possible sentient lives.
not to be a dick or anything, but there absolutely is a number that exists that could accurately represent the number of sentient lives lost. it's the maximum number of sentient lives in a universe multiplied by a little over 5,000 which means you add three orders of magnitude and multiply by five.
I mean we know how many particles there are in the universe with in plus or minus 10 orders of magnitude so there's less possible sentient lives.
3/26 c39 sadist34
Slight inconsistency in this chapter and the next. You forgot that you sent Shizune with Sakura and Ino to Iwa and she is with the party now traveling to the summit.
Slight inconsistency in this chapter and the next. You forgot that you sent Shizune with Sakura and Ino to Iwa and she is with the party now traveling to the summit.
3/18 c1 arianamax177
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2/24 c14 SensuBeanCartel
wait a second... that wouldn't actually count as beastiality would it? I think Kakashi has it wrong. I mean, yeah, with the Yaminaka and the Inuzuka it makes sense because mind transfer just puts the mind in the animal's body but the body is still a dog. With Naruto, its still HIS body, so it wouldnt count, would it?
wait a second... that wouldn't actually count as beastiality would it? I think Kakashi has it wrong. I mean, yeah, with the Yaminaka and the Inuzuka it makes sense because mind transfer just puts the mind in the animal's body but the body is still a dog. With Naruto, its still HIS body, so it wouldnt count, would it?
1/14 c48 Sarcasm Sage 626
Well, the Summit ended as well as anyone could have expected... that is cut short on account of half a dozen fires popping up all at once with a few more powder kegs being placed in the Kage's forces.
Onoki vetoing using the chain link on himself makes sense for the reasons he listed, and the workaround with volunteers from the Kages subordinates gives them confirmation of the worst of the intel without taking AS large a risk as underdoing a personality shift as bug as Sasuke's. That said, the aftermath makes it clear even THAT was plenty risky, each of Mei and Ay's best men now having a literal lifetime of trauma to process and being even twitchier around Sasuke than before. Not a perfect solution, but honestly the best they could hope for given the horrific state the old timeline was in.
On that topic, the old timeline. In hindsight was a bit odd that the events that lead to the Downer Beginning of the story weren't so much as reference in the first story, but I suppose anyone who could remember wouldn't want to open all those wounds. Tsunade recounting it to Jiraiya was bad enough, Sasuke's summary added more of the unsettling details from the enemies side, and Chojuro and Darui's recollections paints an even fuller, graphic picture of just how horrific things were. Future Ao openly calling it worse than the most traumatic portion of his life drives it home all the further. Makes their rage at Sasuke all the more understandable.
Speaking of which, Sasuke. Mentally a mess since his mind was the equivalent of a well maintained garden that just got introduced to a slew of invasive plants and species, his old self severely ramping up his pride and anger in the process. Appreciate the balance you struck with him here, visibly struggling against his poisoned impulses and at least trying to convince people listening with logical arguments rather than play the ineffective "I am superior to you" card. Hell, he even gets props for using his new demeanour to goad the other Kage past their hesitation and let him back up Kiri on their way home.
Side note, love the humour of Naruto throwing shade for the ancient Uchiha's poor placement of the greatest secrets and said secrets countermeasure. To be fair, the whole thing was meant to STOP their members from abusing Izanagi, so in their mind the more people who know how to stop this nonsense the better.
The plots of all the movies going off at once, while the Kage are tied up and Naruto is still recovering adds a lot of tension to the story without feeling contrived. The protagonists forces are scattered and their heaviest hitter is out of commision, so there's plenty for the rest of the cast to do, with the number and distance between the oncoming fires justifying smaller teams. Kudos to Kiba for being Genre Savvy enough to take the Oogakari's ramblings as a sign to prepare. Am looking forward to seeing what you have planned for each movie plot.
Also continue to greatly enjoy how you write Kabuto. Guy perfectly encapsulates the feel of a morally grey Wild Card, helping one deranged lunatic while discretely warning him away from his tenuous ally. Also deserves massive credit for apparently having such absurd preparations he can sense a teleport from a country away, which prevented his current employer from being caught with his pants down. Morbidly curious as to what role he plays in the ensuing chaos.
Well, the Summit ended as well as anyone could have expected... that is cut short on account of half a dozen fires popping up all at once with a few more powder kegs being placed in the Kage's forces.
Onoki vetoing using the chain link on himself makes sense for the reasons he listed, and the workaround with volunteers from the Kages subordinates gives them confirmation of the worst of the intel without taking AS large a risk as underdoing a personality shift as bug as Sasuke's. That said, the aftermath makes it clear even THAT was plenty risky, each of Mei and Ay's best men now having a literal lifetime of trauma to process and being even twitchier around Sasuke than before. Not a perfect solution, but honestly the best they could hope for given the horrific state the old timeline was in.
On that topic, the old timeline. In hindsight was a bit odd that the events that lead to the Downer Beginning of the story weren't so much as reference in the first story, but I suppose anyone who could remember wouldn't want to open all those wounds. Tsunade recounting it to Jiraiya was bad enough, Sasuke's summary added more of the unsettling details from the enemies side, and Chojuro and Darui's recollections paints an even fuller, graphic picture of just how horrific things were. Future Ao openly calling it worse than the most traumatic portion of his life drives it home all the further. Makes their rage at Sasuke all the more understandable.
Speaking of which, Sasuke. Mentally a mess since his mind was the equivalent of a well maintained garden that just got introduced to a slew of invasive plants and species, his old self severely ramping up his pride and anger in the process. Appreciate the balance you struck with him here, visibly struggling against his poisoned impulses and at least trying to convince people listening with logical arguments rather than play the ineffective "I am superior to you" card. Hell, he even gets props for using his new demeanour to goad the other Kage past their hesitation and let him back up Kiri on their way home.
Side note, love the humour of Naruto throwing shade for the ancient Uchiha's poor placement of the greatest secrets and said secrets countermeasure. To be fair, the whole thing was meant to STOP their members from abusing Izanagi, so in their mind the more people who know how to stop this nonsense the better.
The plots of all the movies going off at once, while the Kage are tied up and Naruto is still recovering adds a lot of tension to the story without feeling contrived. The protagonists forces are scattered and their heaviest hitter is out of commision, so there's plenty for the rest of the cast to do, with the number and distance between the oncoming fires justifying smaller teams. Kudos to Kiba for being Genre Savvy enough to take the Oogakari's ramblings as a sign to prepare. Am looking forward to seeing what you have planned for each movie plot.
Also continue to greatly enjoy how you write Kabuto. Guy perfectly encapsulates the feel of a morally grey Wild Card, helping one deranged lunatic while discretely warning him away from his tenuous ally. Also deserves massive credit for apparently having such absurd preparations he can sense a teleport from a country away, which prevented his current employer from being caught with his pants down. Morbidly curious as to what role he plays in the ensuing chaos.
1/8 c47 Alsderda
man as much as love you storys its always a hard choice, either read the New chapter and miss 70% of whats going on or start form the beginning...
judging by the fact i dont have a epub of TTRT on my phone ita been over 2 years, soo guess ill read this chapter in a few weeks RIP thx for posting it anyway
ps you author notes are more entertaining than a good amount of storys ive stumbled over lol
man as much as love you storys its always a hard choice, either read the New chapter and miss 70% of whats going on or start form the beginning...
judging by the fact i dont have a epub of TTRT on my phone ita been over 2 years, soo guess ill read this chapter in a few weeks RIP thx for posting it anyway
ps you author notes are more entertaining than a good amount of storys ive stumbled over lol
12/30/2024 c48 jcampbellohten
God, "the Zero-tails" is such a dumb idea. Well, here's to hoping movie villains entering means we'll get normies unprepared for OP shenanigans.
I like Takamaru. He talks like a gimmick character, but he's a hawk, so it's not cringeworthy.
God, "the Zero-tails" is such a dumb idea. Well, here's to hoping movie villains entering means we'll get normies unprepared for OP shenanigans.
I like Takamaru. He talks like a gimmick character, but he's a hawk, so it's not cringeworthy.
12/27/2024 c48 
10HmmDoesntmatter
WHOOO! Congrats on the house man! I’m jealous rn. Great new chapter, thanks for the update and Merry Christmas!
10HmmDoesntmatterWHOOO! Congrats on the house man! I’m jealous rn. Great new chapter, thanks for the update and Merry Christmas!