
12/28/2012 c2 XphiaDP
I'm interested to see what happens. Please continue this!
I'm interested to see what happens. Please continue this!
12/28/2012 c2
7Myra the Dovahkiin
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
12/28/2012 c2
1S.M.Carseas
VAS HAPPENING!
Love your story AND your pen/user name! Can't wait to see jack in high school!

VAS HAPPENING!
Love your story AND your pen/user name! Can't wait to see jack in high school!
12/27/2012 c1 Sam Manson
love it! cant wait 4 another ;P
love it! cant wait 4 another ;P
12/27/2012 c1
3weatherprooftradgedy
This looks like it will be very interesting, I just have one question, in the summary you said that Jack would be going undercover in a high school. I don't understand how that would work since there would be people who didn't believe in him and so they wouldn't be able to see him.

This looks like it will be very interesting, I just have one question, in the summary you said that Jack would be going undercover in a high school. I don't understand how that would work since there would be people who didn't believe in him and so they wouldn't be able to see him.
12/26/2012 c1 Nekofreeak349
This looks awesome... plzz continuee
can't wait for the next chapter
aahh! i loved this.. i know its only the first chapter but it was awesome!
This looks awesome... plzz continuee
can't wait for the next chapter
aahh! i loved this.. i know its only the first chapter but it was awesome!