for We happy few1/2/2013 c1 
10SunnyStorms
Well I'm glad the exchange got you writing again :D. It's a short piece, but I thought you conveyed that progression of their relationship from not-exactly-friends-but-not-strangers to something-more-than-friends beautifully. I liked the way you chose to structure the story too - it worked really well to add to the progression you were showing, and I loved your choices of phrasing as well. Lines like: "They walked down the hallway next to each other but not together because a Malfoy and a Weasley did not walk together" really stuck with me. This was a lovely little one-shot. You should definitely write more DG!
10SunnyStormsWell I'm glad the exchange got you writing again :D. It's a short piece, but I thought you conveyed that progression of their relationship from not-exactly-friends-but-not-strangers to something-more-than-friends beautifully. I liked the way you chose to structure the story too - it worked really well to add to the progression you were showing, and I loved your choices of phrasing as well. Lines like: "They walked down the hallway next to each other but not together because a Malfoy and a Weasley did not walk together" really stuck with me. This was a lovely little one-shot. You should definitely write more DG!
1/1/2013 c1 77Boogum
Ooh, I wasn't expecting this at all. It was nice, in a bittersweet kind of way. I liked the layout you used, too; it worked really well for the story.
77BoogumOoh, I wasn't expecting this at all. It was nice, in a bittersweet kind of way. I liked the layout you used, too; it worked really well for the story.
12/28/2012 c1 3Disk 9
Awww. That's so sweet. Good to see you writing again, by the way.
I loved the ending. It's so uncertain, but it's also very sure in itself. Really nice job, and I hope you can keep writing. :D
3Disk 9Awww. That's so sweet. Good to see you writing again, by the way.
I loved the ending. It's so uncertain, but it's also very sure in itself. Really nice job, and I hope you can keep writing. :D
12/28/2012 c1 17rowan-greenleaf
How sad, but how well written! I get the feeling that this battle is not going to turn out well for them, which makes the title somewhat ironic. But they WERE lucky, if you think about it, because they had each other. You did such a great job of portraying the tenuous but lingering nature of their relationship,the not quite friends and not yet lovers situation that they were in at the beginning. Your characterization of both Draco and Ginny is excellent, and your writing is very descriptive, which is something I really like. I feel like I am almost there with them. I am going to cross my fingers and hope that they make it out alright in the end, because you made me care for them. Great job.
17rowan-greenleafHow sad, but how well written! I get the feeling that this battle is not going to turn out well for them, which makes the title somewhat ironic. But they WERE lucky, if you think about it, because they had each other. You did such a great job of portraying the tenuous but lingering nature of their relationship,the not quite friends and not yet lovers situation that they were in at the beginning. Your characterization of both Draco and Ginny is excellent, and your writing is very descriptive, which is something I really like. I feel like I am almost there with them. I am going to cross my fingers and hope that they make it out alright in the end, because you made me care for them. Great job.