
12/29/2012 c1 Reader
Very intense and well writen. The further I read, the more I was drawn into the story. Lol, I thought he was going to knock her unwanted attention out for a moment.
Very intense and well writen. The further I read, the more I was drawn into the story. Lol, I thought he was going to knock her unwanted attention out for a moment.
12/30/2012 c2
18SnoopGirl69
Awwww, that was so fluffy and sweet - You have a way with words that has me, a don't-even-go-there non-shipper of Callen/Nell, tapping my fingers on my desk waiting, somewhat patiently, for the next chapter :)

Awwww, that was so fluffy and sweet - You have a way with words that has me, a don't-even-go-there non-shipper of Callen/Nell, tapping my fingers on my desk waiting, somewhat patiently, for the next chapter :)
12/30/2012 c2
3punkyredhead
Omg! Didnt think it could get better but it did! I am speechless! More more more!

Omg! Didnt think it could get better but it did! I am speechless! More more more!
12/30/2012 c1 jimi18
I really hope you continue with this. I want to know what happens next! You are a great writer and your Fics grip me straight away!
I really hope you continue with this. I want to know what happens next! You are a great writer and your Fics grip me straight away!
12/29/2012 c1 tmpbooth
Oh! Now this i have to read. A vulernerable and unsure Callen is unusual. Can't wait for the rest.
Wonderfully written and very much in character.
Oh! Now this i have to read. A vulernerable and unsure Callen is unusual. Can't wait for the rest.
Wonderfully written and very much in character.
12/29/2012 c1 L'ImperatriceElle
Oh boy is he gutsy! So like Callen to just walk right up and plant a kiss on her to show his feelings. What a man! I liked the concept and enjoyed this piece. I could definitely see this as a multi-chapter story, perhaps some things from Nell's perspective as well? Whatever you decide, keep up the great work!
Oh boy is he gutsy! So like Callen to just walk right up and plant a kiss on her to show his feelings. What a man! I liked the concept and enjoyed this piece. I could definitely see this as a multi-chapter story, perhaps some things from Nell's perspective as well? Whatever you decide, keep up the great work!
12/29/2012 c1
18SnoopGirl69
I read this not seeing the pairing in 'Characters'. I thought it was a mystery pairing and we had to guess, lol, but I guessed Nell half way through and was a bit disappointed as I am NOT a Callen/Nell fan in any way BUT when a story is as well written as this, I will follow it through to the end :) You sealed my interest with an assertive Callen at the end. Loved it :)

I read this not seeing the pairing in 'Characters'. I thought it was a mystery pairing and we had to guess, lol, but I guessed Nell half way through and was a bit disappointed as I am NOT a Callen/Nell fan in any way BUT when a story is as well written as this, I will follow it through to the end :) You sealed my interest with an assertive Callen at the end. Loved it :)
12/29/2012 c1 primesgirl4
Great chapter I love Nell and Callen together. I thought it was cute the kiss on the forehead at the end. Please update
Great chapter I love Nell and Callen together. I thought it was cute the kiss on the forehead at the end. Please update
12/28/2012 c1
3Ncisbonescovertaffairs
OMG YES! Please keep going! I, not a big nellen fan but this my friend, is very very good!

OMG YES! Please keep going! I, not a big nellen fan but this my friend, is very very good!
12/28/2012 c1
3punkyredhead
I love it. ... I have seen this type of thought process in my head too with Callen and Nell as well. ... glad to know I am not the only one. Can't wait for more.

I love it. ... I have seen this type of thought process in my head too with Callen and Nell as well. ... glad to know I am not the only one. Can't wait for more.