
10/25/2013 c14
3alix33
"Upon seeing the Kensi" - "Upon seeing Kensi".
"this mission took a bit of toll" - "a bit of a toll".
"minor scraps and bruises" - "scrapes and bruises".

"Upon seeing the Kensi" - "Upon seeing Kensi".
"this mission took a bit of toll" - "a bit of a toll".
"minor scraps and bruises" - "scrapes and bruises".
7/7/2013 c1 Guest
What happened to this story? it was the best...please continue
What happened to this story? it was the best...please continue
4/17/2013 c13 Guest
nallen nalllen, nallen, continue with this story please?
nallen nalllen, nallen, continue with this story please?
4/17/2013 c13 Guest
Glad to have u back thNk u for writing
Glad to have u back thNk u for writing
4/17/2013 c13
10lezzles1956
Just found this today and have been enjoying it immensly! Loving the writing but when I reached your note about Spring Break, I thought I've read that before but am SURE I have never read this story so I researched your id. Of COURSE! "What Now". I love that too.
You are very talented - able to write 2 such different styles and yet both stories are completely riveting!
Really looking forward to Friday for "What Now" and hoping for an update of this one as soon as. You've inspired some bookart as well and I will pm you as soon as it is done to let you know where you can find it
Lezzles
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Just found this today and have been enjoying it immensly! Loving the writing but when I reached your note about Spring Break, I thought I've read that before but am SURE I have never read this story so I researched your id. Of COURSE! "What Now". I love that too.
You are very talented - able to write 2 such different styles and yet both stories are completely riveting!
Really looking forward to Friday for "What Now" and hoping for an update of this one as soon as. You've inspired some bookart as well and I will pm you as soon as it is done to let you know where you can find it
Lezzles
x
4/15/2013 c13 ally
love your story. there has been lots of flirting and chasing and it seems a little out of character for Nell and callen both. if you could add a little bit of actual interactions like dates it might make it a little more real. at this point they are both analyzing a lot
love your story. there has been lots of flirting and chasing and it seems a little out of character for Nell and callen both. if you could add a little bit of actual interactions like dates it might make it a little more real. at this point they are both analyzing a lot
4/15/2013 c13 Guest
more nallen please?
more nallen please?
4/15/2013 c13
18SnoopGirl69
I was like "YES!" an update on this wonderful story. Love the teasing/flirting between Callen and Nell - never would have thought Nell Jones would be his weak spot :)

I was like "YES!" an update on this wonderful story. Love the teasing/flirting between Callen and Nell - never would have thought Nell Jones would be his weak spot :)
4/15/2013 c13
26jimi18
Was thrilled to see a new chapter up, thoroughly enjoyed the description of Eric in his Pj's. looking forward to reading more soon.

Was thrilled to see a new chapter up, thoroughly enjoyed the description of Eric in his Pj's. looking forward to reading more soon.
4/15/2013 c13
20shestarsky
I was so happy to see this update. The interaction between Nell/Callen is great.

I was so happy to see this update. The interaction between Nell/Callen is great.
4/6/2013 c12 Susan L. Grabon
This is a hell of a story. Just love it.
This is a hell of a story. Just love it.
4/6/2013 c3 Susan L. Grabon
Can you tell me where to find a man like that?
Can you tell me where to find a man like that?