12/30/2012 c1 10lezzles1956
Please continue - this is really good.

I'm getting SO fed up with JF killing people as soon as they see their child!

Lezzles

12/29/2012 c1 Guest
please continue its exactly the kind of story i really want to read at the moment and you write really well!

12/29/2012 c1 Kaiti7
This was really good ... A much better ending :)