1/20/2015 c5 Asshh
hot as fuck, write more please. one with suki and a smut Azula/TyLee and Mai/Azula after Mai and Tylee's betrayal with azula actually "punishing" them. that would be awesome
hot as fuck, write more please. one with suki and a smut Azula/TyLee and Mai/Azula after Mai and Tylee's betrayal with azula actually "punishing" them. that would be awesome
1/20/2015 c8 Asdfg
Fuck. This is hot as hell, please, write more.
Do one with Mai/Azula alone, one with Suki and with Pricess Yue would be interesting, since the y are bitch royals
Seriously, this is so good.
Fuck. This is hot as hell, please, write more.
Do one with Mai/Azula alone, one with Suki and with Pricess Yue would be interesting, since the y are bitch royals
Seriously, this is so good.
1/20/2015 c8 578QWE
Hello again, as I promised, here I am.
First of all, most authors can't really portray very good the characters, and obviously they can't write good sex scenes. But since I read the first chapter of this, I was smitten. Seriously, your writing is by far one of the best I've ever read. And the sex scenes are wow, I have no words, you left me speechless; I kinda got turned on a few times, because well, the writing is hot and the plots too. Every chapter is amazing, I can actually puncture every situation in my mind.
I really hope you continue this and your other story, both have a lot of potential. And I believe tons of people would be so happy to read an update.
Have a very nice day. And I wish you the best.
Hello again, as I promised, here I am.
First of all, most authors can't really portray very good the characters, and obviously they can't write good sex scenes. But since I read the first chapter of this, I was smitten. Seriously, your writing is by far one of the best I've ever read. And the sex scenes are wow, I have no words, you left me speechless; I kinda got turned on a few times, because well, the writing is hot and the plots too. Every chapter is amazing, I can actually puncture every situation in my mind.
I really hope you continue this and your other story, both have a lot of potential. And I believe tons of people would be so happy to read an update.
Have a very nice day. And I wish you the best.
11/3/2014 c8 PugTheMagician
All of these lemons are very wel written. I thought it kinky that you had azula be dominated by toph after she had dominated so many others. The threesome with ty lee and mai was pretty hot too
All of these lemons are very wel written. I thought it kinky that you had azula be dominated by toph after she had dominated so many others. The threesome with ty lee and mai was pretty hot too
5/8/2014 c8 Saranka
Interesing last chapter. So when are you going to install more chaps, i'm really liking this dominant futa Azula. I especially like the Azula/Mai kinda "ship"
Interesing last chapter. So when are you going to install more chaps, i'm really liking this dominant futa Azula. I especially like the Azula/Mai kinda "ship"
12/14/2013 c8 12Wetfutaku
It has long been my opinion that the world is lacking quality futanari literature, and you have revealed yourself to be a shining light in the literary morass. Each chapter is short, yet well written; each plot the same and yet infinitely detailed. The characters are unique and accurately portrayed.
Overall, a fine, fine job well done.
It has long been my opinion that the world is lacking quality futanari literature, and you have revealed yourself to be a shining light in the literary morass. Each chapter is short, yet well written; each plot the same and yet infinitely detailed. The characters are unique and accurately portrayed.
Overall, a fine, fine job well done.
10/21/2013 c8 Anon
Hey, I love this story and what you've done with it. Also, you may want[read: really should] tell people that there is absolutely no chance any of these girls get pregnant(though I doubt how Toph knew that sperm caused pregnancy) in this story. Not saying you shouldn't/can't change it for dramatic effect, but you should really state that hermaphrodites can't get anyone pregnant, the same way Ligers can't reproduce. Keep up the excellence!
Hey, I love this story and what you've done with it. Also, you may want[read: really should] tell people that there is absolutely no chance any of these girls get pregnant(though I doubt how Toph knew that sperm caused pregnancy) in this story. Not saying you shouldn't/can't change it for dramatic effect, but you should really state that hermaphrodites can't get anyone pregnant, the same way Ligers can't reproduce. Keep up the excellence!
10/21/2013 c4 anon
Nice story. One thing I would've done, however was to have Mai end up being a screamer and let that [the fact that she's a screamer] everyone by surprise. I think it's really hot of the shy girl ending up not being so shy at all.
Nice story. One thing I would've done, however was to have Mai end up being a screamer and let that [the fact that she's a screamer] everyone by surprise. I think it's really hot of the shy girl ending up not being so shy at all.
9/10/2013 c8 Guest
I'm so glad you continued these! One of the best series out there!
I'm so glad you continued these! One of the best series out there!
8/25/2013 c8 Guest
interesting, please continue
interesting, please continue
7/27/2013 c7 Guest
I enjoy this a lot :D
Mind doing another one with Katara please?
I enjoy this a lot :D
Mind doing another one with Katara please?