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3/7/2013 c10 greydragon987
Aww! So cute! Artemis and Holly are having twins!
2/10/2013 c9 4mrhawkprime
in the axial chapter 9 have Artemis fowl's mother and father and his young twin brothers visit
2/4/2013 c8 mrhawkprime
good story and do more
2/1/2013 c8 1Sarena Akhter
Nooooo! Trouble! I am going to kill opal! Nice chapter though :)
2/1/2013 c4 8leviastiel
bit too much talking, its running like a playscript. i'd like to know what they're thinking.
2/1/2013 c8 1coolerguy99
Man I feel bad for minerva
1/30/2013 c7 12bubblecloudz
oooooohhhh whats opal gonna do now?

only criticism is that it isn't very clear where a new character POV starts and ends.
maybe an extra line, or a bar?
1/19/2013 c7 1Sarena Akhter
SHISSSSH! P{LZZZ UPDATE!
1/14/2013 c6 F0123P0L1T3
Koboi is back?!
LE GASP
Great chapter even if it does seem slightly jumbled, but, one question, How did Opal come back? or when does this take place?

-Housemech10
1/14/2013 c6 Sarena Akhter
YEAH!THE CLIMAX IS HERE!
PLZ UPDATE SOON!
1/14/2013 c6 1Grandthrawn
please update soon
1/8/2013 c5 fackthis
Hi. My review below.
Pros:
Planned story.
Cons:
Needs spell check, less OOCness, perhaps beta.
I see you got yourself a beta, which is really great. I hope you continue with this.
Review my first AF fanfic! Please? :) You'll make my day!
1/6/2013 c4 Guest
I agree shopping is boring.
1/6/2013 c5 HolidayBoredom
Yup, glad you've thought of getting a beta! I'd be happy to beta the next chapter, because I really want to get my claws into this. I don't have a beta profile, but have a read of my fics (Short Circuits is the most recent stuff) and if you're satisfied that I'm up to standard then give me a PM :)
(HolidayBoredom is my proper name on here, I'm just on my phone and it's a pain to log in with).

Holi
1/5/2013 c5 Tawny
pinkboxerguy
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