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6/26/2015 c1 37Ersatz Einstein
There were some annoying grammatical errors ("stand there Munch," capitalization after dependent quotes, tense shifts, etc.), but they could be reasonably ignored. You hit a nice balance on the dark, dramatic tone of the scene and the occasional sardonic line. Both characters seemed IC, although Elliot was a tad overly emotional.
3/25/2013 c1 7PeachLaundryMachine
Awww that was really sweet
1/13/2013 c1 18BigMouth96
Oh. My. God. I am completely in love with this story! It's probably one of the best one-shots I've read! And I love the picture you chose to go with it :D
12/30/2012 c1 261Evil Cosmic Triplets
I really like how you wrote John - very spot-on. I felt bad for Elliot, and the little bits of what happened to cause him to be in such a broken state were revealed slowly throughout the story - that worked well.

The hug was quite wonderful, but then again, I am partial to hugs.

Nice work.

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