for Ciel X Reader Chapter 1: Welcome Home, My Lady2/3/2013 c8 Guest
OMFG THIS IS FREAKING AWESOME! PLEASE UPDATE!
OMFG THIS IS FREAKING AWESOME! PLEASE UPDATE!
2/3/2013 c8 D3L3TETH1SACC0
Omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgl mgomg o mhomg! AWESOMENESS! LOVE THIS STORY AND PLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSSEEEEE MAKE MORE!
Omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgl mgomg o mhomg! AWESOMENESS! LOVE THIS STORY AND PLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSSEEEEE MAKE MORE!
2/2/2013 c8 Alchemist of Sapphire Flames
I slapped Ciel...I"M SO SORRY CIEL! I also made him cry...I feel terrible now, I almost cried D,:
I slapped Ciel...I"M SO SORRY CIEL! I also made him cry...I feel terrible now, I almost cried D,:
2/2/2013 c8 
3Gwenni-ni-chan
For some reason, this story fit well when I threw my OC in there. So...so good... :3
3Gwenni-ni-chanFor some reason, this story fit well when I threw my OC in there. So...so good... :3
1/31/2013 c8 tip your tophat
What I like most about Black Butler is the interesting use of such beings like demons, soul reapers, angels, and reanimated corpses; these things by themselves are interesting, but together they have made for quite a thrilling story indeed. With so much ripe material to work with you would think the fan fiction for this series would be phenomenal, you would think writers would be inspired to create works to reflect the uniqueness of this series, but sadly, this is not the case.
Creativity has taken a backseat and now all this fandom has been receiving are outdated themes that went bad a long time ago. Could you not think of anything more interesting than a Ciel x Reader story? With so much this series has to offer could you not find any true inspiration to make something truly outstanding?
Do you realize how many stories we have on here already that are like yours? Do you not realize how many Mary Sues and author with friend(s) this fandom has already taken on? This story is neither unique nor original; you were not the first or only one to have written a story such as this. Don’t stick with ideas just because you believe them to be popular or simply to garner reviews, be more individualistic next time and try writing something that comes from you and not someone else.
An important rule to remember before posting a story is to be sure you’ve gone through it and corrected any mistakes you might have made. Nothing is worse than an author who knowingly posts a story riddled with errors. Your grammar and spelling need to be corrected in many areas and you need to check your punctuation. When changing your stories layout be sure to edit any existing chapters to reflect the changes that were made for a smoother flow and better read.
What I like most about Black Butler is the interesting use of such beings like demons, soul reapers, angels, and reanimated corpses; these things by themselves are interesting, but together they have made for quite a thrilling story indeed. With so much ripe material to work with you would think the fan fiction for this series would be phenomenal, you would think writers would be inspired to create works to reflect the uniqueness of this series, but sadly, this is not the case.
Creativity has taken a backseat and now all this fandom has been receiving are outdated themes that went bad a long time ago. Could you not think of anything more interesting than a Ciel x Reader story? With so much this series has to offer could you not find any true inspiration to make something truly outstanding?
Do you realize how many stories we have on here already that are like yours? Do you not realize how many Mary Sues and author with friend(s) this fandom has already taken on? This story is neither unique nor original; you were not the first or only one to have written a story such as this. Don’t stick with ideas just because you believe them to be popular or simply to garner reviews, be more individualistic next time and try writing something that comes from you and not someone else.
An important rule to remember before posting a story is to be sure you’ve gone through it and corrected any mistakes you might have made. Nothing is worse than an author who knowingly posts a story riddled with errors. Your grammar and spelling need to be corrected in many areas and you need to check your punctuation. When changing your stories layout be sure to edit any existing chapters to reflect the changes that were made for a smoother flow and better read.
1/22/2013 c7 Guest
How Cute! 3
How Cute! 3
1/23/2013 c7 1kishe
so...of cours the Undertaker knows who she is...but shouldn't she know about the 'Legendary' Grim Reaper? well i can't wait for the next chapter. :)
1kisheso...of cours the Undertaker knows who she is...but shouldn't she know about the 'Legendary' Grim Reaper? well i can't wait for the next chapter. :)
1/20/2013 c6 prettyflower34
B. If it were me I would choose B. Oh now I really can't wait for an update!
B. If it were me I would choose B. Oh now I really can't wait for an update!
1/13/2013 c6 Kurohanaki
Please update soon, also, i choose answer C.
Please update soon, also, i choose answer C.