for A Rogue's Tale9/5/2013 c13 
5RougeReaper
Im glad that you are going to continue the story it has so much potential and i cant wait for the next chapter
5RougeReaperIm glad that you are going to continue the story it has so much potential and i cant wait for the next chapter
7/19/2013 c4 Raven34link
so she's been living at the park all this time and no one from work has noticed. How does she shower? or does she?
so she's been living at the park all this time and no one from work has noticed. How does she shower? or does she?
7/19/2013 c2 Raven34link
I don't mean to be rude but you really need to separate the sentences, cause I keep getting confused about which one of them is talking.
I don't mean to be rude but you really need to separate the sentences, cause I keep getting confused about which one of them is talking.
7/19/2013 c1 Raven34link
how old is Rogue?
is this your first fan fiction?
You should try separating the sentences to not to confuse the reader, and the paragraph is too long.
how old is Rogue?
is this your first fan fiction?
You should try separating the sentences to not to confuse the reader, and the paragraph is too long.
7/17/2013 c1 Really
"Sort of a Romy between Remy and Rogue."
Oh, so it's one of THOSE Romys. Cuz for a second there I thought it was a Romy between Toad and Jean Grey. . .
"Sort of a Romy between Remy and Rogue."
Oh, so it's one of THOSE Romys. Cuz for a second there I thought it was a Romy between Toad and Jean Grey. . .
7/16/2013 c5 Death-to-Chocolate
for some weird reason when storm said he'll be ok i imagined misterious wind blowin and her fading in the darkness... dramitic much...?
for some weird reason when storm said he'll be ok i imagined misterious wind blowin and her fading in the darkness... dramitic much...?
2/11/2013 c1 CodeAliasWave
Too lazy to log in; sorry. (Would you like to check out my stories though? C:
I find that this story is quite confusing, whoops. Sorry. The plot is weird and bizarre, and the overall flow of the whole thing isn't good. Everything seems strung together and it's just... ugh?
Nevertheless you're still new so keep trying. hopefully you should have some better stories soon!
See ya,
CodeAliasWave
Too lazy to log in; sorry. (Would you like to check out my stories though? C:
I find that this story is quite confusing, whoops. Sorry. The plot is weird and bizarre, and the overall flow of the whole thing isn't good. Everything seems strung together and it's just... ugh?
Nevertheless you're still new so keep trying. hopefully you should have some better stories soon!
See ya,
CodeAliasWave