
9/16/2015 c1 jupiter2005
good for a one shot. would be kind interesting to see how things went after that if alec comes for her or not. keep up the good writing
good for a one shot. would be kind interesting to see how things went after that if alec comes for her or not. keep up the good writing
5/27/2015 c1 bbmassey88
This could really go somewhere with a few more chapters! Awesome story! But with Alec's obcession and Edwards protectiveness, wow, just wow! Enjoyed it so much! Was just left wanting more!
This could really go somewhere with a few more chapters! Awesome story! But with Alec's obcession and Edwards protectiveness, wow, just wow! Enjoyed it so much! Was just left wanting more!
1/26/2015 c1 MamaNeedsABreak
Loved it! Please consider expanding this O/S. There is soooooooo much more to this story.
Loved it! Please consider expanding this O/S. There is soooooooo much more to this story.
11/8/2014 c1 MsTorres
This was an awesome o/s definitely not what I was expecting so I can safely say that I was impressed at your style of delivering the prompt. This definitely has potential to be expanded into a full blown story if you ever wanted to 'explore' the possibilities. Thank you so much for sharing.
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This was an awesome o/s definitely not what I was expecting so I can safely say that I was impressed at your style of delivering the prompt. This definitely has potential to be expanded into a full blown story if you ever wanted to 'explore' the possibilities. Thank you so much for sharing.
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4/21/2014 c1 Novel's addict
I absolutely love it and i really wish that you would make a sequel to it
I absolutely love it and i really wish that you would make a sequel to it
10/7/2013 c1 meadow11
gah! I'd love to see more from these two- that was great - I was reading on the edge of my seat!
gah! I'd love to see more from these two- that was great - I was reading on the edge of my seat!
6/5/2013 c1 Erikajo
Brilliant. You have that thing about always leaving the audience wanting more down pat. :)
Brilliant. You have that thing about always leaving the audience wanting more down pat. :)
4/22/2013 c1
3artisticteach
Aww you can't end it there! You have to make this a full story, please?! This was great and I loved it, but I need more!

Aww you can't end it there! You have to make this a full story, please?! This was great and I loved it, but I need more!