
12/31/2013 c15 Ichigo
I'm so excited that you decided to continue! Update soon!
I'm so excited that you decided to continue! Update soon!
12/25/2013 c15 guest
Omg...u changed the ending...which I great by the way...but are you continuing with the story...(please say you are :])
Omg...u changed the ending...which I great by the way...but are you continuing with the story...(please say you are :])
12/23/2013 c15 Guest
Much better. More please!
Much better. More please!
5/27/2013 c15
1KenaBeliever
I didn't appreciate that ending. Far too abrupt, no closure.
Not that I don't understand. Sarah made the dumbest choice possible, and this is the only reasonable outcome. Just... Ugh.

I didn't appreciate that ending. Far too abrupt, no closure.
Not that I don't understand. Sarah made the dumbest choice possible, and this is the only reasonable outcome. Just... Ugh.
5/21/2013 c15
10schizo-nephilim
NO! It can't end here! Surely there's a way to work things out, and even if there's not, I have to know what happens next! What does he do when they come for her? Does he use Awake on her and try to get her to run? Does he try to make an escape with her? Come on, just one last chapter for the conclusion! Please!

NO! It can't end here! Surely there's a way to work things out, and even if there's not, I have to know what happens next! What does he do when they come for her? Does he use Awake on her and try to get her to run? Does he try to make an escape with her? Come on, just one last chapter for the conclusion! Please!
5/21/2013 c10 schizo-nephilim
Mmmm...cuddling, clearing the air, chocolate chip pancakes...sounds like a recipe for a budding romance to me!
Mmmm...cuddling, clearing the air, chocolate chip pancakes...sounds like a recipe for a budding romance to me!
5/21/2013 c8 schizo-nephilim
Ah, the wonders of the friends with benefits! Yeah, that would definitely make things awkward for that to come out, lol!
Ah, the wonders of the friends with benefits! Yeah, that would definitely make things awkward for that to come out, lol!
5/20/2013 c7 schizo-nephilim
Yay! Now we're starting to get somewhere...gotta break through the barriers somehow, and the whole misunderstanding between both of them needed to be cleared up before they could move any further. Awesome job so far!
Yay! Now we're starting to get somewhere...gotta break through the barriers somehow, and the whole misunderstanding between both of them needed to be cleared up before they could move any further. Awesome job so far!
5/20/2013 c6 schizo-nephilim
Looks like a certain Soul is falling for a certain human...heehee! Of course he couldn't tell everything, but he did tell the truth when he was talking to Sunny about the situation. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Looks like a certain Soul is falling for a certain human...heehee! Of course he couldn't tell everything, but he did tell the truth when he was talking to Sunny about the situation. Can't wait to see what happens next!
5/20/2013 c5 schizo-nephilim
I knew she wouldn't go too far! He must not be home, or he has company...must be why the Cheetos bag is missing.
I knew she wouldn't go too far! He must not be home, or he has company...must be why the Cheetos bag is missing.
5/20/2013 c4 schizo-nephilim
Awww...how sweet! Naturally, his compassion and help would get through to her; she'd have to have a heart of stone for it not to. I have a feeling she's not gonna wander too far away. :-)
Awww...how sweet! Naturally, his compassion and help would get through to her; she'd have to have a heart of stone for it not to. I have a feeling she's not gonna wander too far away. :-)
5/20/2013 c3 schizo-nephilim
HA! I love his confusion at her behavior and some of the phrases she uses, it made it funny to me. I can totally see this happening, too. Of course she would assume the worst, but that's because she's still got the mindset of what a human male might do and doesn't know anything about how the Souls really are.
Wonder how he's gonna answer her question?
HA! I love his confusion at her behavior and some of the phrases she uses, it made it funny to me. I can totally see this happening, too. Of course she would assume the worst, but that's because she's still got the mindset of what a human male might do and doesn't know anything about how the Souls really are.
Wonder how he's gonna answer her question?