for Learning about Percy1/3/2013 c2 
12puzzlingnerd57
This is fun... although, it would be funny to read Posiedon's reactions to Mark of Athena, or Zeus's reactions to Lost Hero, or maybe Hades reactions to Son of Neptune, with Hazel and all.
12puzzlingnerd57This is fun... although, it would be funny to read Posiedon's reactions to Mark of Athena, or Zeus's reactions to Lost Hero, or maybe Hades reactions to Son of Neptune, with Hazel and all.
1/3/2013 c2 Lilith
Hi, after Clarisse says "Not this time punk" Shouldn't the phrase be "Everyone looked relieved", rather than released. It's "hoping", not hopeing and instead of lieing, it's "lying". Besides the grammatical mistakes, I think this story is terrific and I can't wait to see how it goes.
Hi, after Clarisse says "Not this time punk" Shouldn't the phrase be "Everyone looked relieved", rather than released. It's "hoping", not hopeing and instead of lieing, it's "lying". Besides the grammatical mistakes, I think this story is terrific and I can't wait to see how it goes.
1/3/2013 c1 Lilith
Hi, couldn't help noticing that you have a few misspelled words, I think. First, astrodnary. I think you mean extrodinary. And inthe first paragraph, it's role model, not rule model.
Hi, couldn't help noticing that you have a few misspelled words, I think. First, astrodnary. I think you mean extrodinary. And inthe first paragraph, it's role model, not rule model.
1/2/2013 c2 T
Cool
Cool
1/2/2013 c2 1percy94
this story is cool though i was a little confuse at first but still awesome! update soon!
1percy94this story is cool though i was a little confuse at first but still awesome! update soon!
1/2/2013 c2 16freefall-gypsy
you could do "bull fighting" scene just before he gets to camp
the Socks of Death scene
the Bathroom scene have Clarisse read that one
the "ant-eater" scene
Crusty water-bed
discovery of being able to breathe underwater and his Imedeate desire to want to drown himself
Bribing Charon scene
aunty Em scene
Meatloaf suprise scene the letter he gets from his mother
first capture the flag game
16freefall-gypsyyou could do "bull fighting" scene just before he gets to camp
the Socks of Death scene
the Bathroom scene have Clarisse read that one
the "ant-eater" scene
Crusty water-bed
discovery of being able to breathe underwater and his Imedeate desire to want to drown himself
Bribing Charon scene
aunty Em scene
Meatloaf suprise scene the letter he gets from his mother
first capture the flag game
1/2/2013 c2 Amy Jackson
Please update both the last Olympian & this!
Please update both the last Olympian & this!
1/2/2013 c2 6Creamoe
I like this idea of excerpts from Percy's life.
The only suggestions I have is to check your spelling. In ch1, you spelled astrodnary(or somewhere along those lines). The word you're looking for is extraordinary. Also, and I've noticed this in you Sent Back in Time Series, you spell believe, 'beleave'. The correct spelling is believe.
Also, don't have the campers interupt every couple lines.
6CreamoeI like this idea of excerpts from Percy's life.
The only suggestions I have is to check your spelling. In ch1, you spelled astrodnary(or somewhere along those lines). The word you're looking for is extraordinary. Also, and I've noticed this in you Sent Back in Time Series, you spell believe, 'beleave'. The correct spelling is believe.
Also, don't have the campers interupt every couple lines.
1/2/2013 c2 kingawesome
Vs. The Minotaur
Vs. Medusa
Vs. Ares
That should be good enough for the first book.
Vs. The Minotaur
Vs. Medusa
Vs. Ares
That should be good enough for the first book.