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6Creamoe
I like this idea of excerpts from Percy's life.
The only suggestions I have is to check your spelling. In ch1, you spelled astrodnary(or somewhere along those lines). The word you're looking for is extraordinary. Also, and I've noticed this in you Sent Back in Time Series, you spell believe, 'beleave'. The correct spelling is believe.
Also, don't have the campers interupt every couple lines.

I like this idea of excerpts from Percy's life.
The only suggestions I have is to check your spelling. In ch1, you spelled astrodnary(or somewhere along those lines). The word you're looking for is extraordinary. Also, and I've noticed this in you Sent Back in Time Series, you spell believe, 'beleave'. The correct spelling is believe.
Also, don't have the campers interupt every couple lines.
1/2/2013 c2 kingawesome
Vs. The Minotaur
Vs. Medusa
Vs. Ares
That should be good enough for the first book.
Vs. The Minotaur
Vs. Medusa
Vs. Ares
That should be good enough for the first book.
1/2/2013 c2
4Compliment Giver
Hopefully you mean that jason had no doubt that Percy WOULD survive. I hope not the other thing...

Hopefully you mean that jason had no doubt that Percy WOULD survive. I hope not the other thing...
1/2/2013 c1 supsup
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1/2/2013 c1 Guest
CONTINUE! PLEASE!
CONTINUE! PLEASE!
1/2/2013 c1 aesir21
Awesome idea on best moments instead of completely reading the books. I am hoping they will be in chronological order and including all books like demigod files.
Awesome idea on best moments instead of completely reading the books. I am hoping they will be in chronological order and including all books like demigod files.
1/2/2013 c1 Guest
I loved it! I will read the rest of this story when it's published!
I loved it! I will read the rest of this story when it's published!
1/2/2013 c1 Guest
Continue totally continue
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