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2/22/2013 c1 39adventure time idiota1
I love your fanfiction! Its kinda addicting, Sweet Tooth and Candy turning over and still nuts! Plus I love evenesance! I'm actually writing a musical with my friend and the songs are evenesance
2/4/2013 c5 Stargleekpotter
I know you said that might be the last chapter, but if you ever get any more ideas I would love it if you continued! It's such a good story!
1/23/2013 c5 7Holdim
Please, please, please continue! I need closure on this. Oh My Dead Wizard B man, I love this twisted relationship, and your fic! Keep going!
1/21/2013 c4 Holdim
Okay, I'll start with the bad. Don't worry! There's not much.

There are a few grammatical errors. Not the most surprising of things, as everyone makes these mistakes, but just look out for them. Also, I'm making these problems bigger than there are. I'm a bit of a perfectionist, and if I notice one wrong spelling in my writing I feel awful. I then have to rush to fix it before anyone notices. It's a wonder I've ever been able to upload stories on here.

Now's just a little bit about your writing. The lines that stood out to me were, " Why did I do those stupid drugs and lose my job? Why did I think it would be such a great idea to try LSD and all that shit?" Something about that just seemed fake to me. Not that I could write anything better for that context, it just doesn't seem to fit. Though we all have a different perception of Sweet Tooth's character, so it may just be a personal thing.

I'm going to just stop complaining now, and say how much I enjoyed this chapter. Yay, you're back! I really like this story, and damn the feels in this chapter are good. Don't worry about taking a while to update, I understand how difficult it is thinking of ideas and giving them the time and care they deserve. Take as long as you need to write each chapter, so they continue to be as good as this!

Thank you. I hope there's no spelling mistakes in this...
1/3/2013 c1 Holdim
Ouch. My heart hurts.

I did enjoy this! I can't remember if I've heard the song or not, but it worked well. As I'm a clear Sweedy shipper, the dark currents of their relationship pain me to the core but I can't pretend they're not there.

I hope you continue. I know really I should want Candy to move on, to become better. But I'm a messed up fangirl so I'm hoping that ST comes back and they're together again once more. Yeah, I have problems.

There are a few spelling errors, but it's clear what you mean. Continue this!

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