for 50 Shades of A Young family7/29/2024 c43 Guest
Phoebe a good lawyer but she is stupid when it comes to relationship. To marry a man who originally wanted to hurt her and her family is digusting.
Phoebe a good lawyer but she is stupid when it comes to relationship. To marry a man who originally wanted to hurt her and her family is digusting.
8/15/2020 c5 Jessilynn1218
Sorry I missed Chapter 4. It just says ignore on that tab. Can you please repost chapter 4?
Sorry I missed Chapter 4. It just says ignore on that tab. Can you please repost chapter 4?
6/7/2020 c22 CoquiPR
No me gusta su primer nombre que recuerda el personaje desagradable de la amiga de Mía. Y tampoco creo que deba llamarse Ella y aunque C ya no desprecia a su madre muerta, no es un honor que merezca un hija. No cambia lo que vivió y lo que le recuerda así que no entiendo pq Ana insiste en eso. Pudieron no nombrarla por la bisabuela o Kate
No me gusta su primer nombre que recuerda el personaje desagradable de la amiga de Mía. Y tampoco creo que deba llamarse Ella y aunque C ya no desprecia a su madre muerta, no es un honor que merezca un hija. No cambia lo que vivió y lo que le recuerda así que no entiendo pq Ana insiste en eso. Pudieron no nombrarla por la bisabuela o Kate
6/1/2020 c1 CoquiPR
Ryan de fue con Ted no con Phoebe. Y entiendo a CG y su sobreprotección, pero Phoebe tiene que aprender. A lo 9 aun podía y creo que hicieron bien en hacer HS, pero a los 12 ya debe ir aprendiendo a lidiar con su condición.
Ryan de fue con Ted no con Phoebe. Y entiendo a CG y su sobreprotección, pero Phoebe tiene que aprender. A lo 9 aun podía y creo que hicieron bien en hacer HS, pero a los 12 ya debe ir aprendiendo a lidiar con su condición.
7/16/2019 c39 Guest
This is the most stupid Phoebe!
This is the most stupid Phoebe!
5/19/2016 c43 SuzB
Just finished rereading this great story with the epilogue. Thank you for a very enjoyable read.
Just finished rereading this great story with the epilogue. Thank you for a very enjoyable read.
5/2/2016 c43 Mary
Wonderful update! Yes! I'm with other several people who wants more of this story. I agree with an addition new of next sequel. Please do! I want a small flashback of how Laurence reaction to finding out Phoebe's first pregnancy with Camden for next sequel! I have been wondering about that part. Write anything! Even a little drama maybe with Laurence work firing an employee or Phoebe's work threatening. How about an office private sex? Or every surface in the house. Hahaha.
Wonderful update! Yes! I'm with other several people who wants more of this story. I agree with an addition new of next sequel. Please do! I want a small flashback of how Laurence reaction to finding out Phoebe's first pregnancy with Camden for next sequel! I have been wondering about that part. Write anything! Even a little drama maybe with Laurence work firing an employee or Phoebe's work threatening. How about an office private sex? Or every surface in the house. Hahaha.
5/2/2016 c43 VRB Mariposa
Wow, well those gap fillers were amazing. Loved it. Thanks so much for entertaining us. :-)
Wow, well those gap fillers were amazing. Loved it. Thanks so much for entertaining us. :-)
5/1/2016 c43 Guest
Your talent story never disappoint me. Please don't stop writing. Throw in another new sequel. It would be so kind of you to consider our request for more writing of the story. I can't say enough how much I thank you for your amazing story. So, Thank you! Please think about it and continue more... A new sequel would absoutely bring us the joy of reading more of Laurence & Phoebe life story!
Your talent story never disappoint me. Please don't stop writing. Throw in another new sequel. It would be so kind of you to consider our request for more writing of the story. I can't say enough how much I thank you for your amazing story. So, Thank you! Please think about it and continue more... A new sequel would absoutely bring us the joy of reading more of Laurence & Phoebe life story!
4/30/2016 c43 koocher
What an amazing story your writing is brilliantly done. Please continue to write I would love to continue to read what ever story you write. This fan cannot wait to see what adventure awaits.
Cheers
NK
What an amazing story your writing is brilliantly done. Please continue to write I would love to continue to read what ever story you write. This fan cannot wait to see what adventure awaits.
Cheers
NK
4/24/2016 c43 Guest
Great story! Thank you! You should write next new sequel to Laurence & Phoebe Life story. I would love to see Camden and their little princess Mackenzie grow up... perhaps if laurence and phoebe have 3rd children... What about writing a story about a family vacation or Laurence and Phoebe having a sex in her office at work like CG would do with Ana at his office? Write anything! Lol. Please do write about Laurence and Phoebe Life for next new sequel. It would be great!
Great story! Thank you! You should write next new sequel to Laurence & Phoebe Life story. I would love to see Camden and their little princess Mackenzie grow up... perhaps if laurence and phoebe have 3rd children... What about writing a story about a family vacation or Laurence and Phoebe having a sex in her office at work like CG would do with Ana at his office? Write anything! Lol. Please do write about Laurence and Phoebe Life for next new sequel. It would be great!
4/22/2016 c43 iftheheart
Aww lovely way to end the story! Thank you do much for writing this amazing story!
Aww lovely way to end the story! Thank you do much for writing this amazing story!