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5/7 c58 Pixelitus
Yup, this fic is just as good as I remember it, as always. The amount of potential for more chapters and sequels is just insane. I really look forward to everything that’s to come. It’s just…

Well, if I had one critique for this fic is this. Its update schedule is absolutely horrendous. And I mean no offense, seriously. The fic is great and I get how motivation comes and goes, not to mention real life responsibilities. But it’s been 12 years since this fic started. 12 years, yet we’re still not even at Naoto. As it stands, we’d be lucky to get three chapters a year. I can’t complain about the quality, but it’d be nice to see updates come from this fic more regularly. Because at this rate, we’re going to get to 2030, 2035 without finishing at Inaba.

Anyways, all that aside, I had fun rereading this.
5/5 c58 guillermocejas767
I read the whole fic in a week. Amazing stuff, keep up the good work author-san
5/4 c58 UncleTerri
Binged read this, i really enjoyed it and hope to see the next update soon.
4/12 c58 Gilgamesh50
Great Chapter and at the end of this chapter i decided that yukiko is the best ship imo
4/12 c58 Gilgamesh50
At this point i ship anyone but chie with shirou so please god dont do it.
4/6 c58 Guest
Honestly, this feels like the happiest Shirou has ever been in a Fate story even compared to other fics. While others focus more on his time during or after the 5th holy grail war, it is nice for a story like this where he can just have fun and build his strength before the main event in Fuyuki. Sure he is Yu in this story but I still like how well you mesh elements of Persona/SMT with the Nasuverse. I kinda wish we could have seen the first interaction between Marie and the gang and revealing her role in assisting Shirou especially since Rise mentions the Velvet Room here.
3/26 c58 codywhite162
I really enjoyed this chapter and the girls such as Yukiko and Rise fighting over Shirou's attention was cute. Poor Sakura back home has some competition back home. Looking forward to what is going to happen next in the story and hopefully fanfiction can fix the chapter not appearing issue.
3/26 c57 codywhite162
This was an excellent chapter! Looking forward to the next update.
3/25 c58 evilstatistic19
Good chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one.
3/23 c57 2Sonicman66
Poor Emiya-kun, dealing with the hazards of being a Harem Protagonist.
Taiga, the tale of genji is not a how-to on raising children. Bad Tiger. No thirsting over your adopted little brother!
3/22 c13 darkeragez
good chapter x13
3/22 c12 darkeragez
good chapter x12
3/19 c58 Guest
Soooo when are we going to see Shirou and Chie in the dap up tournament ;)
3/20 c58 21Rialga
Glad to see you back! And with one juicy update too!

Love the continuing development of the characters outside of just the main story, so to speak, especially since it helps further expand on the newer thoughts and resolutions they've had in past chapters. Shirou especially needs it given his particular issues and it makes me wonder how you'll handle things there as the story continues to progress. And on an aside, I think it would be great/funny if the rest of the Investigation Team ever gets to visit Fuyuki and specifically Shirou's house, if only to boggle at how big the estate Kiritsugu left him, lol.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
3/20 c58 shafinjakaria975
Beautiful, I loved this chapter.
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