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72CuteCat213
How do you have Honors Am Lit and miss these continuity and spelling errors? Don't you have a beta? Besides being invaluable as a writing resource with catching mistakes and helping with brainstorming, another writer to fangirl over your favorite anime is always a good thing and I've made most of my life-long friends that way.
72CuteCat213How do you have Honors Am Lit and miss these continuity and spelling errors? Don't you have a beta? Besides being invaluable as a writing resource with catching mistakes and helping with brainstorming, another writer to fangirl over your favorite anime is always a good thing and I've made most of my life-long friends that way.
1/5/2015 c7 CuteCat213
Um... How did Hawkeye go from General last chapter to a Colonial this chapter? I also notice how when Ed's introduced to the camp he's said to be seventeen, then *the very next sentence* he somehow loses a year of age, to go back to seventeen at the end of the chapter...
Um... How did Hawkeye go from General last chapter to a Colonial this chapter? I also notice how when Ed's introduced to the camp he's said to be seventeen, then *the very next sentence* he somehow loses a year of age, to go back to seventeen at the end of the chapter...
9/18/2014 c20 1SomeDieYoung
Omg, this story was AMAZING in its totality. Sooo cruel cliffhanger, I have to read the sequel right tomorrow! I actually didn't intend to read this completely this evening but yeah, I did... Read it all at once, using the time I should've used to preparing to tomorrow's test ._. But thanks for writing this amazing story! The plot was amazing, all the events beings so unpredictable, and in addition I loved your writing style :3
1SomeDieYoungOmg, this story was AMAZING in its totality. Sooo cruel cliffhanger, I have to read the sequel right tomorrow! I actually didn't intend to read this completely this evening but yeah, I did... Read it all at once, using the time I should've used to preparing to tomorrow's test ._. But thanks for writing this amazing story! The plot was amazing, all the events beings so unpredictable, and in addition I loved your writing style :3
4/25/2014 c1 Emmanueldontdoit
Too many inaccurate height references for post brotherhood as per the usual with FMA fandom writers. Ed was no longer short in his adult hood, ìf you read/watched it then you should know that. otherwise, seems interesting. Will keep reading.
-Lyson
Too many inaccurate height references for post brotherhood as per the usual with FMA fandom writers. Ed was no longer short in his adult hood, ìf you read/watched it then you should know that. otherwise, seems interesting. Will keep reading.
-Lyson
3/9/2014 c8 manga-neko-96
I'm in Honors Chemistry and it is brutal! Let's try to survive. Yay, lots of action in this chapter!
I'm in Honors Chemistry and it is brutal! Let's try to survive. Yay, lots of action in this chapter!
3/9/2014 c7 manga-neko-96
Catholic School, I feel your pain. I still remember my middle school English classes at Catholic school! Good luck with exams!
Catholic School, I feel your pain. I still remember my middle school English classes at Catholic school! Good luck with exams!
2/22/2014 c20 5ac135
Thank you for writing this story! I really enjoyed reading it, and I'm moving on to the sequel right now. But seriously, great job with the storyline and such :)
5ac135Thank you for writing this story! I really enjoyed reading it, and I'm moving on to the sequel right now. But seriously, great job with the storyline and such :)