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1/5 c5 Emy17
This was quite good! I know writers have their own lives but please continue this!
10/1/2013 c5 8Dark-Angel-Princess 01
please update soon!
2/1/2013 c5 1LouiseCJ201
I LOVE IT!
1/28/2013 c5 21My2BrownEyes
You've made the "seduction" very sweet and innocent.
1/19/2013 c4 25octavaluna-801
Good Job with the grammar ;)
Thor is an idiot! How can he leave Loki on his own? D:
1/15/2013 c4 21My2BrownEyes
What a great introduction to Tony! As soon as he said his name, I had a big smile on my face. (And the Lamby nickname made me laugh.)
1/14/2013 c3 1UmbrellaEl
You, my friend, made a excellent story! *raises juice box*
Your writing is wonderful. :)
1/12/2013 c3 25octavaluna-801
Interesting idea, but please try to revise your grammar.
1/9/2013 c3 21My2BrownEyes
Very sweet. Nice way to introduce the Warriors Three & Sif.
1/9/2013 c2 18God of Mishief
It's really cute: ) I could so see the boys bringing home random animals and just being like "Mom, can I keep it, pleeeeeaaaasssseeee?!"
1/7/2013 c2 4razturk
Great chapter. I love the way you describe the world and the relationship developing between the two brothers.
1/7/2013 c1 razturk
Interesting idea this is a good beginning.
1/5/2013 c2 Inhumanthings
Aww. I love it.
1/5/2013 c2 21My2BrownEyes
So my favorite part just might be Loki saying "it's your fault cuz you have a big butt" after pushing Thor in the water. LOL That was too funny.
1/5/2013 c1 janet1982
interesting,please update)
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