for Yami no Ai1/16 c41 codywhite162
This story is still incredible to read and hopefully Jiraiya can get to Ino in time to save her. Looking forward to the next update!
This story is still incredible to read and hopefully Jiraiya can get to Ino in time to save her. Looking forward to the next update!
1/14 c41 Elchabon
Thank you very much for the new chapter.
It was very interesting, and I'm looking forward to seeing what Naruto will do if it comes to that, one way or another it will be decisive for their future.
Thank you very much for the new chapter.
It was very interesting, and I'm looking forward to seeing what Naruto will do if it comes to that, one way or another it will be decisive for their future.
1/14 c40 HurZysn
Is my download broken or is the story broken? cuz I'm missing chapter 41 and it keeps telling me there's 41 chapters but it won't download it
Is my download broken or is the story broken? cuz I'm missing chapter 41 and it keeps telling me there's 41 chapters but it won't download it
1/13 c41 
2AlgusSadalfas
Honestly, fuck that entitlement from Jiraiya this chapter. He doesn’t get to be pissy with that “Why should I bother” attitude just because Naruto is justifiably angry enough to not forgive or want to associate with him for his neglect. Not happy with Hinata here for siding with Jiraiya either. I understand why, but this just looks like it was written this way to forcibly move the plot along via “suck it up, Buttercup”, and given how long it took for this chapter to come out, I’m further inclined to believe this (IRL matters aside, of course).
2AlgusSadalfasHonestly, fuck that entitlement from Jiraiya this chapter. He doesn’t get to be pissy with that “Why should I bother” attitude just because Naruto is justifiably angry enough to not forgive or want to associate with him for his neglect. Not happy with Hinata here for siding with Jiraiya either. I understand why, but this just looks like it was written this way to forcibly move the plot along via “suck it up, Buttercup”, and given how long it took for this chapter to come out, I’m further inclined to believe this (IRL matters aside, of course).
1/13 c41 Belios
Honestly Jiraiya really pissed me off this chapter and I hate that he's being written that he's right when he's being an absolute shit. What kind of person who has seriously wronged someone says to them "If you're not going to forgive me why should I bother trying to make up for my mistake?" And Hinata annoyed me for backing him up.
Honestly Jiraiya really pissed me off this chapter and I hate that he's being written that he's right when he's being an absolute shit. What kind of person who has seriously wronged someone says to them "If you're not going to forgive me why should I bother trying to make up for my mistake?" And Hinata annoyed me for backing him up.
1/12 c41 1Narutofan8762
Good chapter. Jiraiya has a point about the clan name thing. It would be easier if Naruto and the girls used another name instead of Uzumaki. Namikaze is a possibility since Naruto has a right to it and Minato wasn’t part of a clan. It does expose the secret of Naruto being Minato’s son, but that might help him. Konoha seems to be a bigger threat to Naruto than Iwa. Another clan name they can use is Haruno. That would be the simplest solution.
1Narutofan8762Good chapter. Jiraiya has a point about the clan name thing. It would be easier if Naruto and the girls used another name instead of Uzumaki. Namikaze is a possibility since Naruto has a right to it and Minato wasn’t part of a clan. It does expose the secret of Naruto being Minato’s son, but that might help him. Konoha seems to be a bigger threat to Naruto than Iwa. Another clan name they can use is Haruno. That would be the simplest solution.
1/12 c41 thor94
really hope you plan danzo's plan completely fail and finally expose him as the criminal and traitor he is to legally sentence him to death.
naruto already suffered enough to become danzo obedient puppet (even for a single chapter, it is already a chapter too many)
really hope you plan danzo's plan completely fail and finally expose him as the criminal and traitor he is to legally sentence him to death.
naruto already suffered enough to become danzo obedient puppet (even for a single chapter, it is already a chapter too many)
1/12 c41 SPark681
Hmmm, so Naruto may not do what Danzo wants him to do huh interesting anyways keep up the great work!
Hmmm, so Naruto may not do what Danzo wants him to do huh interesting anyways keep up the great work!
1/12 c41 22Yami Luna Kitsune
great chapter
damn, damnzo actually fucked up
hope damnzo gets killed, and said captured, then interrogated
eager for the next chapter
22Yami Luna Kitsunegreat chapter
damn, damnzo actually fucked up
hope damnzo gets killed, and said captured, then interrogated
eager for the next chapter