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1/5/2013 c1 MaryHooper
Not awful (and do keep writing!) Nice how the piece was framed around Sherlock's violin.

A couple of constructive criticisms: bored not board. Could have used some more substantive content. The part two and epilogue sections didn't really need to be bolded (or even mentioned.) I honestly felt like the story was so short that is made it feel too chunky and not at all cohesive.

Cheers. Happy writing!
1/4/2013 c1 zechirator
nice fic but
bored*
not board.
It's hard to enjoy a fic with frustrating spelling.
But otherwise sweet fic
1/4/2013 c1 2catlover210
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