
1/5/2013 c1 MaryHooper
Not awful (and do keep writing!) Nice how the piece was framed around Sherlock's violin.
A couple of constructive criticisms: bored not board. Could have used some more substantive content. The part two and epilogue sections didn't really need to be bolded (or even mentioned.) I honestly felt like the story was so short that is made it feel too chunky and not at all cohesive.
Cheers. Happy writing!
Not awful (and do keep writing!) Nice how the piece was framed around Sherlock's violin.
A couple of constructive criticisms: bored not board. Could have used some more substantive content. The part two and epilogue sections didn't really need to be bolded (or even mentioned.) I honestly felt like the story was so short that is made it feel too chunky and not at all cohesive.
Cheers. Happy writing!
1/4/2013 c1 zechirator
nice fic but
bored*
not board.
It's hard to enjoy a fic with frustrating spelling.
But otherwise sweet fic
nice fic but
bored*
not board.
It's hard to enjoy a fic with frustrating spelling.
But otherwise sweet fic