for first impressions7/8/2014 c1 Guest
More pls i love hibari
More pls i love hibari
11/20/2013 c1 
1dbzsotrum9
You really need to work on your grammar... to put it simple, Hibari sounds retarded in this and everything was way too simple and messed up, it's not funny, it's kinda sad
I'm not trying to push you down, but... I'm sorry
1dbzsotrum9You really need to work on your grammar... to put it simple, Hibari sounds retarded in this and everything was way too simple and messed up, it's not funny, it's kinda sad
I'm not trying to push you down, but... I'm sorry
10/31/2013 c1 6TheGrammarNaziIsHere
i wanna slap you for continuing this story and only making it a one shot.
6TheGrammarNaziIsHerei wanna slap you for continuing this story and only making it a one shot.
7/20/2013 c1 Guest
Ee?! Its all? I expected more. But thanks
Ee?! Its all? I expected more. But thanks
2/21/2013 c1 Katsu-chan
Kon'nichiwa author-san !
I really like the story , so keep up the good work ! • tata
Kon'nichiwa author-san !
I really like the story , so keep up the good work ! • tata
2/21/2013 c1 Katsu-chan
Kon'nichiwa author-dono !
I really like the story , so keep up the good work ! Peace out •
Kon'nichiwa author-dono !
I really like the story , so keep up the good work ! Peace out •
1/11/2013 c1 Unknown
Good for a first fic but u could do better
Good for a first fic but u could do better
1/6/2013 c1 6tsukuyomi67
Hibarin, ne? Yeah, I think Hibari looks and acts like a vampire with biting fetish. Sheesh. Keep up the good work
6tsukuyomi67Hibarin, ne? Yeah, I think Hibari looks and acts like a vampire with biting fetish. Sheesh. Keep up the good work