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1/21/2013 c16 Just a person
Is that it? Or will you be posting more? Cause what you are writing is good.
1/21/2013 c16 1Elemental Dragon Slayer
nice chapter :D

A few mistakes, something about a rider on a green rider and the bit after that. Minor points so whatever. Good stuff.
1/21/2013 c5 Guest
i'm sorry but who's N? Lol and Dora is like... 14 now XD
1/21/2013 c16 2Mark Silverwing
15 and 16 are the same. You posted the wrong document.
1/20/2013 c16 Krokodyl
Well if You died, then You can't sing. No, seriously You can't sing.
I love the ending- Eragon wept, protected the tomb and suddenly disappeared. Puf! Will You explain where he had gone for 7 years?
1/20/2013 c16 Vizual-Era
LOOOL your author's note at the beginning was just hilarious :D
1/20/2013 c16 Guest
LOTR! I love the reference!
1/20/2013 c16 2ArthurShade
Very nice please continue
1/20/2013 c16 midnightwolf 97
K i was lost for a little bit but i got it
1/20/2013 c16 3middleearthmidget
Brilliant work, the epitah was a nice touch!
1/20/2013 c16 12SioraiDragon
Evandar, he was a good elf. Surprising that he's Islanzadi's husband. Great chapter! Can't wait to see what you write next!
Dragon Out!
1/20/2013 c15 e1venl0rd
Oh and loved the Lord of the Rings box joke! Epic.
1/20/2013 c16 e1venl0rd
You're now my favorite writer. And it's all because of your update time. How you update so fast and keep your chapters long and great are beyond me. Good luck on your next
Chapter and this memory chapter was very well done.
1/19/2013 c15 2ArthurShade
Very good
1/19/2013 c15 12SioraiDragon
Eragon... You never respect royalty do you?
Anyway... Great chapter! Write on!
Dragon Out!
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