for Half-Breed1/7/2013 c2 Srini96
Sooo awesome:) excellent plot. A doubt though? Do the other characters get to be introduced too? Roran, katrina, the rest of the village, and oromis and gladear?
Sooo awesome:) excellent plot. A doubt though? Do the other characters get to be introduced too? Roran, katrina, the rest of the village, and oromis and gladear?
1/6/2013 c1 Leon
Hey great idea ,it is a completely new kind of story and I am looking foward for more chapters.
Hey great idea ,it is a completely new kind of story and I am looking foward for more chapters.
1/5/2013 c1 Guest
hey, i have to say it. I loved it. keep going on with it
hey, i have to say it. I loved it. keep going on with it
1/6/2013 c2 
1Elemental Dragon Slayer
nice chapter :D
Erm, a bit shocked by Islanzadi's cold heartedness. Arya IS her daughter and I don't think she'd want her killed, no, not at all. And she loved Evandar, so she wouldn't call him a fool either. I can understand Nasuada in this alternate sort of universe, being hateful etc. But eh, I dunno, seemed a bit far for the queen.
Still, liked it and woo, Eragon's gonna kick some *ss getting Arya back XD
1Elemental Dragon Slayernice chapter :D
Erm, a bit shocked by Islanzadi's cold heartedness. Arya IS her daughter and I don't think she'd want her killed, no, not at all. And she loved Evandar, so she wouldn't call him a fool either. I can understand Nasuada in this alternate sort of universe, being hateful etc. But eh, I dunno, seemed a bit far for the queen.
Still, liked it and woo, Eragon's gonna kick some *ss getting Arya back XD
1/6/2013 c1 Hellious
This a very interesting start. I'm very curious as to how the story will continue. Update soon please.
This a very interesting start. I'm very curious as to how the story will continue. Update soon please.
1/6/2013 c1 1Elemental Dragon Slayer
great idea, like it :D
This is intriguing... so no Faolin backstory I'm guessing? Fair enough. (And ExA right?) Keep it up, top start.
1Elemental Dragon Slayergreat idea, like it :D
This is intriguing... so no Faolin backstory I'm guessing? Fair enough. (And ExA right?) Keep it up, top start.
1/5/2013 c1 ReadingForHours
Really like the idea for this story. I can't wait to see how it plays out. Hope you update soon!
Really like the idea for this story. I can't wait to see how it plays out. Hope you update soon!