for And He Was Known As3/28/2014 c1 Guest
Amen! This is excellent Lady Firewing!
Amen! This is excellent Lady Firewing!
11/6/2013 c1 
181Qoheleth
Your Ladyship:
Just a little tip from someone who's had the same problem before: If you cut and paste an ellipsis (like this one, for instance…) directly into your title, the site won't automatically delete it the way it does periods.
Sincerely,
Qoheleth
181QohelethYour Ladyship:
Just a little tip from someone who's had the same problem before: If you cut and paste an ellipsis (like this one, for instance…) directly into your title, the site won't automatically delete it the way it does periods.
Sincerely,
Qoheleth
2/18/2013 c1 29Swanwhite2
Very true and beautifully put. My thought at first was that it would end with his being known as just, but when one thinks of it, forgiven and just are really connected.
29Swanwhite2Very true and beautifully put. My thought at first was that it would end with his being known as just, but when one thinks of it, forgiven and just are really connected.
1/24/2013 c1 zorro
Very nice!
Very nice!
1/19/2013 c1 52Rose and Psyche
Most of the time I don't like free verse, but this was very, very nice. Beast, slave, traitor and forgiven sum up what Edmund went through so well.
Thank you!
-Psyche
52Rose and PsycheMost of the time I don't like free verse, but this was very, very nice. Beast, slave, traitor and forgiven sum up what Edmund went through so well.
Thank you!
-Psyche
1/9/2013 c1 15Narnia2098
Wow, that was really good. Reminds me so much of what Jesus did for us and how we were before. It seemed really fitting. I loved it.
God Bless,
Ashleigh
15Narnia2098Wow, that was really good. Reminds me so much of what Jesus did for us and how we were before. It seemed really fitting. I loved it.
God Bless,
Ashleigh
1/6/2013 c1 50King Caspian the Seafarer
Beautiful! I could never write free verse. It's so difficult, and yet you've done it so well. There is something amazing in the transformation that takes place in Edmund...the path Lewis takes him on. I hadn't thought of it quite as you wrote it-Beast, Slave, Traitor, Forgiven-until now. Very well done!
50King Caspian the SeafarerBeautiful! I could never write free verse. It's so difficult, and yet you've done it so well. There is something amazing in the transformation that takes place in Edmund...the path Lewis takes him on. I hadn't thought of it quite as you wrote it-Beast, Slave, Traitor, Forgiven-until now. Very well done!