for To Love a Beast1/7/2013 c1 Guest
OOC... but cool. i mean inoue is ooc
the idea was already taken btw just tought id let u know
OOC... but cool. i mean inoue is ooc
the idea was already taken btw just tought id let u know
1/9/2013 c1 
12ulquihime7980
okay, im just wondering. did you delete it the first time so you could add the prologue? i was confused
12ulquihime7980okay, im just wondering. did you delete it the first time so you could add the prologue? i was confused
1/7/2013 c1 Sarilka
I think your story has a lot of potential to be really good, as long as you can do something to keep it original ;since there are already multiple fanfics that start of like this. There were a couple times were it was a little hard to understand what was going on but overall i like the feel and dialogue you had that has a little bit of foreshadowing on how Rukia feels.
I think your story has a lot of potential to be really good, as long as you can do something to keep it original ;since there are already multiple fanfics that start of like this. There were a couple times were it was a little hard to understand what was going on but overall i like the feel and dialogue you had that has a little bit of foreshadowing on how Rukia feels.
1/7/2013 c1 2Senbewbzakura
Aww... this idea was already taken...
but hell you can write whatever you want i guess
have you read Masquerade? it's really good
Orihime is really random...
2SenbewbzakuraAww... this idea was already taken...
but hell you can write whatever you want i guess
have you read Masquerade? it's really good
Orihime is really random...