for Chase Me8/8/2024 c15 Purple rat 76
This is one of the best aus I have ever read
This is one of the best aus I have ever read
9/23/2022 c4 Guest
Eat poop 5 stars
Eat poop 5 stars
1/24/2022 c15 Mimi
This story has its unrealistic parts, of course, like everyone's saying, but it also has its really good parts that make me wonder how the author thought of this. It wasn't realistic, I don't think I'd forgive anyone if they killed someone i love, much less my family, but it's not a real published book, so it's ok ig. it's a good story overall :)
This story has its unrealistic parts, of course, like everyone's saying, but it also has its really good parts that make me wonder how the author thought of this. It wasn't realistic, I don't think I'd forgive anyone if they killed someone i love, much less my family, but it's not a real published book, so it's ok ig. it's a good story overall :)
3/3/2021 c15 Anonymous
So I get you were going for a plot twist but... There was no f-ing explanation!? Luke had no reason to help Percy! But it was a good story.
So I get you were going for a plot twist but... There was no f-ing explanation!? Luke had no reason to help Percy! But it was a good story.
1/24/2021 c5 Guest
Ahh its like the trident
Ahh its like the trident
6/23/2020 c15 Guest
This is really good, and I also really liked your " living proof " story, so I will definitely be checking out your other stories..
This is really good, and I also really liked your " living proof " story, so I will definitely be checking out your other stories..
5/30/2018 c15 Tina
Soooooooo good!
Soooooooo good!
3/26/2018 c15 
2Scripturient16
Right. I'm like, five years late.. but cool! I just wish the part where Annabeth fell in love with Percy (sort of) was more, well, realistic.. there's a point where I feel, oh, right, they love each other now.. And, I get the whole there not being a bullet thing, but why? Why didn't Luke shoot him? Did they know each other from the start, in some twisted assassin collaboration thing? (I don't think so) Why did Luke have a change of heart? I don't get it. Can you tell me? If you're still here..
2Scripturient16Right. I'm like, five years late.. but cool! I just wish the part where Annabeth fell in love with Percy (sort of) was more, well, realistic.. there's a point where I feel, oh, right, they love each other now.. And, I get the whole there not being a bullet thing, but why? Why didn't Luke shoot him? Did they know each other from the start, in some twisted assassin collaboration thing? (I don't think so) Why did Luke have a change of heart? I don't get it. Can you tell me? If you're still here..
12/29/2017 c15 TheGoldenTouchOfMidas
I really loved this story. I do think Annabeth forgave Percy too easy and that Luke having preloaded a blank is a bit out there. But other than that it was very good
I really loved this story. I do think Annabeth forgave Percy too easy and that Luke having preloaded a blank is a bit out there. But other than that it was very good
12/4/2017 c15 74PinkCats
Oh my God, this is amazing you had me hooked from the first chapter. Not to mention your little trick at the end is f***ing clever. Well done you!
Oh my God, this is amazing you had me hooked from the first chapter. Not to mention your little trick at the end is f***ing clever. Well done you!
9/3/2017 c9 Percabeth4life
Hi. I think annabeth forgave Percy far too easily. I mean. Cmon. You don't just forgive anyone or even show slight kindness to someone who killed ur dad and kidnaped u
Hi. I think annabeth forgave Percy far too easily. I mean. Cmon. You don't just forgive anyone or even show slight kindness to someone who killed ur dad and kidnaped u
8/7/2017 c15 Imma Star-Lord
Really enjoyed this story, pretty good character development for the amount of chapters you were aiming for. I did really like the ending; as a matter of fact, I literally said "Oh shit" out loud at the end of chapter 14, but I had a feeling Percy lived.
Really enjoyed this story, pretty good character development for the amount of chapters you were aiming for. I did really like the ending; as a matter of fact, I literally said "Oh shit" out loud at the end of chapter 14, but I had a feeling Percy lived.
4/18/2017 c15 Guest
WTF this fanfic sucks and makes no sense
WTF this fanfic sucks and makes no sense