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7/3/2018 c1 5Project 0mega
I have to agree with rebblake here. Great story I'll amit but that ending though.
12/18/2017 c61 unbridleddesire
okay, im going to pretend that chap 61 didnt exist. it's a nice story, eventho the sage's death seems rushed
12/18/2017 c45 unbridleddesire
and here i thought jihl passed out because the sage is messing with their head
12/17/2017 c36 unbridleddesire
but i thought rain said it loudly that claire is half yun, so why light still didnt get it?
12/16/2017 c22 unbridleddesire
light in this fic is like fang in smoke n mirror, too emotional and hard on themselves. and jihl, jihl is such a sweet girl in here, but i still cant dismiss how much a bitch she is in SnM
12/16/2017 c15 unbridleddesire
soo... i read your OaE on ao3 and couldnt help but wondering that serve as prequel or something? obviously you changed some of it, because jihl n light arent slaves in there. and holy shit jeanne is fucking badass
12/15/2017 c14 unbridleddesire
so it is clear now that cocoon is way more fucked up than pulse. and i can see how light going to struggle with her daddy issues. cant help but cringed when light want to keep the mark on their back
12/15/2017 c7 unbridleddesire
it's funny how light see umbra as rapist but didnt think twice about the women in cocoon who have to serve men like it's normal daily occurrence. how fucked up this universe anyway
12/15/2017 c2 unbridleddesire
so all woman is born to serve men? and if they didnt manage to bear a child before a certain age then they will be slaves? (which probably doesnt change much because it is still against their will). i dont get it, i mean i didnt play bayonetta and ff so i dont get a lots of thing in here
4/11/2013 c61 4Wolvenkite
This isn't angst. This is tragedy. It seems you've run out of happy endings?
3/28/2013 c61 Sure Why Not
What the fuck
3/12/2013 c61 7Leonard Vindel
I was so caught up in the happenings of Paradiso that I forgot about the breeding that was being done outside of it. At least the Umbra allow visitations for the mothers but it must be so horrible to leave your child there and return another day instead of being there constantly, very cruel.

Fang gave Summer twins as well huh, but she didn't even get a chance to hold them or anything. She must hate the Umbra and Fang so much more now and they've even taken Sky away from her. She must be a mess right now, is she even going to survive on Sky's promise of returning to her?

I'm crossing my fingers and hoping for a sequel to this but it's all up to you mother.

Thank you so much again for sharing this with us, I always appreciate the efforts you make.
3/12/2013 c60 Leonard Vindel
Now I'm sad, can't believe this story is over. But i guess after 60 chapters, i'd be tired too. So THANK YOU so very much for the epic tale mother.
I'm still curious about what Fang's bite and how it leads to the comatose state both Lightning and Jihl were in. Fang is a little more open now which is very good.
Jihl survived all that with her twins, i'm very happy about that and also that Lightning proposed to her as well. Glad Lightning finally let Jihl call her Claire and that they are getting married :) :)

Thanks again for sharing this with us, I really enjoyed it :)
3/9/2013 c61 DaPhoenix
Wow...that was a mysterious twist. Good job.
3/9/2013 c61 Passerby-A
Damn it, you should have ended it on the previous chapter. I need this like I need a splinter in my eye. On another note, chapter 61 notwithstanding, it was good that you decided to 'end' on a happy note. But, really, could've given the epilogue a miss. Nice job breaking it, hero ;)

Anyway, it's finally finished. Opinions aside, fantastic job. Never a faster writer. Churning out 60 chapters in mere months. Thanks for the fic and hope to read more from you. Cheers.
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