
4/5/2018 c1 Guest
Tere is no second chárter?!
Tere is no second chárter?!
11/28/2015 c1 Jianna3960
I really like your story and you must have a really creative mind to think this.
I really like your story and you must have a really creative mind to think this.
10/11/2014 c1 Lyna fan 1123
CONTINUE THE STORY!
October 12, 2014 Guam time
CONTINUE THE STORY!
October 12, 2014 Guam time
5/5/2014 c1
53ZJeM
I wish you continued, this chap was very cute. :)
I wonder if we'll ever know what Aphrodite (or was it Venus?) said to Reyna..? I'd kill for it to be what you wrote. ;)
I hope you'll update... Someday. :D

I wish you continued, this chap was very cute. :)
I wonder if we'll ever know what Aphrodite (or was it Venus?) said to Reyna..? I'd kill for it to be what you wrote. ;)
I hope you'll update... Someday. :D
3/21/2014 c1 Guest
Fuck Make another chapter
Fuck Make another chapter
2/17/2014 c1 Caroline
The chapter was short, but good. I wish you would'nt of stopped writing at the best part. Otherwise it was good. Keep going!
The chapter was short, but good. I wish you would'nt of stopped writing at the best part. Otherwise it was good. Keep going!
3/5/2013 c1 Galia
That was amazing make more...EEEEEEEKKKKKK!
That was amazing make more...EEEEEEEKKKKKK!
2/9/2013 c1 Guest
LOL!
LOL!
1/26/2013 c1
3Jrncine
well i cant give you advice on the story cause i have a crappy story. my failed attempt at writing a fanfic. read it if you ever want to read a crappy story. yours was very good.

well i cant give you advice on the story cause i have a crappy story. my failed attempt at writing a fanfic. read it if you ever want to read a crappy story. yours was very good.
1/13/2013 c1 leynaisawesome
I think for a good next chapter would be if Leo gets the tape before piper and something in that line. I really like your story it is really good you are a good writer
I think for a good next chapter would be if Leo gets the tape before piper and something in that line. I really like your story it is really good you are a good writer
1/10/2013 c1 haley giggles
I ship leyna completely. I love these kinds of fanfics, especially the ones where piper is shown as a total b****. Leyna AND bashing piper! Kill two birds with one stone. :)
I ship leyna completely. I love these kinds of fanfics, especially the ones where piper is shown as a total b****. Leyna AND bashing piper! Kill two birds with one stone. :)
1/10/2013 c1 Guest
Really good story. Please continue
Really good story. Please continue
1/11/2013 c1
9SummerSpirit18
Haha I like it!
Well I can give you a sugestion.
Leo steal the record and he go to destroy it
But he bump in Reyna.
Yes again.
And Reyna ask him what he did.
And Leo say it's nothing.
Reyna take the recording
Leo try to get back.
Reyna start it and hear.
And after I let you.
Helpfull?
At least it give you any little idea?

Haha I like it!
Well I can give you a sugestion.
Leo steal the record and he go to destroy it
But he bump in Reyna.
Yes again.
And Reyna ask him what he did.
And Leo say it's nothing.
Reyna take the recording
Leo try to get back.
Reyna start it and hear.
And after I let you.
Helpfull?
At least it give you any little idea?