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9/2/2024 c48 arata7kasuga
Nina is getting kinda annoying not gonna lie. Also, Ino doesn't have small boobs. Also, also, small boobs are cute af. They should never be as big as someones head. Anywho, surprised Ibiki treated his brother like that, even after figuring out the answer. Nice to see a Daimyo care about his country, that was neat! Although, it wasn't raining so how was Aoi able to stop Satsuki, neji, and Lee?
9/2/2024 c47 arata7kasuga
Idate is an immature, ungrateful brat. There is no way he is related to Ibiki. Aoi defeating like seven people consecutively is a bit much. Cool, it was raining, cool he has the Seconds sword, however, three of the people were Jinchuurikis so that really doesn't matter. Also, Kurama is a fox, wouldn't he be able to hear what the O trio say? I don't dislike Nina but I also don't particularly like her either. What is with her repeating words twice? Lastly, while I don't like Kiba, him being beat for no reason is not funny at all. It would be one thing if he deserved it, but you are making the females lack any sense of intelligence, logic, and or maturity by attacking him over nothing.
7/27/2024 c3 RealmHeart
good premise, but I can't help but think that you have a lot of major flaws in your writing. to give an example, why would Ino be surprised that she's teamed with Chōji and Shikamaru? after all, it's almost a given that those three were to be teamed together since their fathers were famous for the Ino-Shika-Chō teamwork, all of them are clan heirs and their abilities compliment each other. Even though Ino is a fangirl whos strongest suite is not logic, it should be clear that she would be teamed with them. I don't want to ramble more, but as far as I've seen there are a huge amount of these mistakes that messes with the plot continuity. I can't help but think this story was written by the author when they were a teen, and was written solely as wish fulfilment while not caring about plot holes at all. If this was polished and betaed well and then reposted, I truly believe this could become one of my favorite stories. But as it is, sorry but it just doesn't make the cut.
7/24/2024 c1 Animeworld2.0
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7/13/2024 c43 3Garou4002
Damn does that mean Sakuras boobs will never grow. Tho then again they didnt grow regardless in cannon
6/19/2024 c67 arata7kasuga
Bigger boobs does not equate to being sexier. Some of the most attractive females I have seen or been with have been below C cups. Like TenTen, she is damn cute! That said, you sometimes refer to males as female. Like TenTens father refering to Tenten as her daughter. Kin and Lee tiring Gai out his absolutely hilarious. One handed seals are possible, like with Haku, so couldn't Ino still use jutsus?
5/5/2024 c67 3doorcf
Still in the middle of reading this but one thing I like despite the fact the sakura bashing is that ... sakura is still intelligent and has good chakra control, like in canon, she answered the questions in the chuninn exam which were suppossed to be so hard that the only solution was to cheat, she mastered healing jutsu and tsunade's seal and strength taijutsu and would've been at minimum a decent genjutsu user. Yeah she has her rough edges and its not complete bullshit like naruto or sasuke but she has her strengths and the fanfic keeps that through all of it.
5/1/2024 c47 Krieger Techpreist
Satski being a relaive or ncestoe of Alison, or better known as Agent Texs is funny to me... also explains all the balls threats
4/29/2024 c1 2Lea RosenWulf
Just started reading, took a glance ahead to see if you kept having naruto s dattebayo at the nd of most his sentences, as it is super distracting to me (though wether that is the adhd speaking or not I am not sure).

Anyway, still plan on reading this, as lemons aren't that big a deal to me (they actually kinda through me off as when Im reading I am not in horni mode, and its a very sudden gear shift for me), but learning that you cut them out still saddens me. This is mainly cause I am SUPER anti-censorship. There are certainly worse fics on site, and the fact that you felt you had to remove a portion of the fic, not because you didn't like it or felt it didn't fit, but because you didn't want some assclown getting it taken down, agitates the hell out of me.

Obviously I am not blaming you for that fear, it is a realistic on, especially nowadays. I plan to read this and hope for alot of romantic fluff that makes me feel warm and fuzzy.
4/5/2024 c13 Ero Hebi Sensei
Only at chapter 13 so far and just loving this masterpiece. The 'Sasuke' vs Sakura fight had me dying of laughter
4/3/2024 c30 1Markan999
I had a hunch that Itachi will be a hard siscon and I was right LMAO
4/3/2024 c28 Markan999
Hoh, I wasn't expecting Hiruzen entering Sage Mode of monkeys, nice.
4/2/2024 c18 Markan999
For those who complain that lemons were removed let me tell you that I remember reading this fic before and those lemons were pretty bad. This fic is better without them
4/2/2024 c38 john.darrah47
It gets confusing some times with the protective level of naruto. Naruto let Tusnade bother his girls during an intimate moment? The girls let Tusnade hurt naruto and dont flip out at her? Seeming inconsistent with how the girls react to stuff as well as Naruto’s reaction. Anyone else feeling that way?
3/28/2024 c24 15SilverLineWriter
Wow, that was pretty funny for Gaara not understanding feelings of affection for a girl. I can’t wait to see what happens next.
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