Reviews: Outtakes | FanFiction

11/14/2013 c5 Sapho99
Okay, I do not want this to be a One-shot! Need a good Poly story,,,,,,,Please, with sugar and cherry on top!
sapho99

11/9/2013 c5 Lurecyka
This was really hot ! I wish there were more :)

11/5/2013 c5 BnSA
WOW! Finally double penetration the way I have fantasized about (yeah, dirty thoughts on my part). So thanks! And happening in my home state-we have hope after all. Thanks!

10/31/2013 c5 Wendyg63
That is HOT!

Great one shot

10/30/2013 c5 KimberlyAnnT
LOVED THIS...

10/29/2013 c2 rubell
ok, i get it now but i want to know what kind of bribes you are taking for a continuation of that? money? sex toys? a weekend in vegas? what? that was sooo damn hot! That Makes Three needs at least one more chapter of their weekend together! PLEASE!

10/29/2013 c5 rubell
dayum!but somehow i read chapter 5 first?

10/29/2013 c5 TwilightAddict37
Holy crow, that was hot. Please, please, please continue this.

10/29/2013 c5 msT7301
*hot*

10/29/2013 c5 gmd028
OMG! Loved it!

10/28/2013 c5 Reader-many
This story MUST have a warning ***you need an other pair pf panties*** fuck that was hot very very hot And i wouldnt mind if you make it a little bit longer ;) thanks for sharring

10/27/2013 c5 MarieLove22
Go Bella. So hot!
I think this really needs to be a full story

10/26/2013 c5 maphie
Hot!

10/26/2013 c5 JoJo757
Bella is one lucky bitch!

10/25/2013 c5 mouseSJ
Loved it, thanks for writing.

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