for Outtakes1/4/2014 c6 SLKerouac
Nice outtake! Trying for the getting even but getting caught by your daughter. Edward and Bella now have to explain. The next day driving by Jacob's house and then seeing it in the daylight. Just trying to be neighborly. Jacob, his wife along with Jasper and Alice know that Edward had something to do with what happened but there was no way of proving it. The kids are now getting restless and want to eat. Off to the diner now. Nice!
Nice outtake! Trying for the getting even but getting caught by your daughter. Edward and Bella now have to explain. The next day driving by Jacob's house and then seeing it in the daylight. Just trying to be neighborly. Jacob, his wife along with Jasper and Alice know that Edward had something to do with what happened but there was no way of proving it. The kids are now getting restless and want to eat. Off to the diner now. Nice!
1/2/2014 c6 Ellie
I loved this! It was great!
I loved this! It was great!
1/4/2014 c6 Leona Bowman
Oh my GOD... that was funnier then hell... awesome!
Sounds like they had a great life.. so far..
Oh my GOD... that was funnier then hell... awesome!
Sounds like they had a great life.. so far..
1/3/2014 c6 kneon
I so can't wait for the sequel, of course I will patiently. I forget how much I love these characters. This is one of my favorite stories.
Happy New Year.
I so can't wait for the sequel, of course I will patiently. I forget how much I love these characters. This is one of my favorite stories.
Happy New Year.
1/3/2014 c6 southernpur-rica
Lord that was awesome! Have really missed this crew and so glad that Autumn now calls them mom and dad instead of him and her. One question, are you still gonna do a sequel for this? Happy New Year huh!
Lord that was awesome! Have really missed this crew and so glad that Autumn now calls them mom and dad instead of him and her. One question, are you still gonna do a sequel for this? Happy New Year huh!
1/3/2014 c6 tas62
OMG, I have missed these two so much and your outtake didn't disappoint. Although I decided to read it at work over my lunch hour and not people sitting around me are thinking I am crazy as I could not stop myself from laughing out loud at several points. Looking forward to more outtakes with the kids.
OMG, I have missed these two so much and your outtake didn't disappoint. Although I decided to read it at work over my lunch hour and not people sitting around me are thinking I am crazy as I could not stop myself from laughing out loud at several points. Looking forward to more outtakes with the kids.
1/3/2014 c6 KDMCAM
That was hilarious! I love these two! You are a genius writer! I have loved everything you have written & I'm looking forward to your next update of "Grand!"
That was hilarious! I love these two! You are a genius writer! I have loved everything you have written & I'm looking forward to your next update of "Grand!"
1/3/2014 c6 
3Evelyne-raconte
MOUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA ! Excellent ! Thank you for sharing, I loke it a lot.
I wish you and your family all the best along 2014.
Happy New Year ! Bonne et Heureuse Année !
3Evelyne-raconteMOUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA ! Excellent ! Thank you for sharing, I loke it a lot.
I wish you and your family all the best along 2014.
Happy New Year ! Bonne et Heureuse Année !
1/3/2014 c6 3HideandSeek19
This is perfection. I dont think ive read a story that i love more than This Life. Cant wait for the 2014 updates!
3HideandSeek19This is perfection. I dont think ive read a story that i love more than This Life. Cant wait for the 2014 updates!