for Ichigo, Uryu, And Isshin Go To Magnolia10/15/2015 c5 sharma.kyle1999
You could just say that you wanted a break from writing,and we know that you probably have a life outside of fanfiction so I don't mind this stuff (taking a break)
You could just say that you wanted a break from writing,and we know that you probably have a life outside of fanfiction so I don't mind this stuff (taking a break)
10/17/2014 c1 LittleAngel01385
This is pretty good for your first story. My first story really really badly sucked so I ended up deleting it. Anyway good job.
This is pretty good for your first story. My first story really really badly sucked so I ended up deleting it. Anyway good job.
3/31/2013 c3 
2Luci Fergess
Nice story so far! It seems very interesting, and I enjoyed it. Please do continue!
Also, the fight scene was wonderful, and I liked the fact that while Ichigo still won the fight, he wasn't ridiculously powerful. In most covers they have ichigo on god-level and defeating the opponent within mere seconds without even trying. So kudos for that.
Also I didn't see very many spelling, punctuation, or grammar mistakes, and what few there were did not effect the reading. So great job on that as well.
I look forward to the next chapter!
Luci-chan
2Luci FergessNice story so far! It seems very interesting, and I enjoyed it. Please do continue!
Also, the fight scene was wonderful, and I liked the fact that while Ichigo still won the fight, he wasn't ridiculously powerful. In most covers they have ichigo on god-level and defeating the opponent within mere seconds without even trying. So kudos for that.
Also I didn't see very many spelling, punctuation, or grammar mistakes, and what few there were did not effect the reading. So great job on that as well.
I look forward to the next chapter!
Luci-chan
3/30/2013 c3 zikl
Please ichigoxerza ichigo x erza please and hurry up man
Please ichigoxerza ichigo x erza please and hurry up man
1/24/2013 c3 4warrior of six blades
Nice job on the chapter and thanks for thanking me on your chapter. Even though you didn't have to do that I am still glad for it. Anyways I like the way how you wrote the rest of the chapter and the fact that ichigo still destroyed a building by accident.
As it is a fairy tail story after all and ichigo is known for not having the best control. I look forward to seeing how the next chapter goes and I will try to get you the Erza vs Uryu fight scene P.M. sometime soon. I hope you don't mind waiting a day or two at most. Keep up the good work and good luck on your future stories/chapters!
4warrior of six bladesNice job on the chapter and thanks for thanking me on your chapter. Even though you didn't have to do that I am still glad for it. Anyways I like the way how you wrote the rest of the chapter and the fact that ichigo still destroyed a building by accident.
As it is a fairy tail story after all and ichigo is known for not having the best control. I look forward to seeing how the next chapter goes and I will try to get you the Erza vs Uryu fight scene P.M. sometime soon. I hope you don't mind waiting a day or two at most. Keep up the good work and good luck on your future stories/chapters!
1/18/2013 c2 warrior of six blades
Nice job on these two chapters of yours. Even though they are kinda short, but I look forward to seeing how things go in the next chapter of this story. As for Ichigo's pairing I vote for Erza because I believe she needs someone to love her and NOT try to kill her for some stupid scheme.
I might be interested in co writing with you on this story. Now that I have a laptop to work with instead of my old hard drive computer back in a storage in North Carolina. Although I do need to know some things first before I can honestly be your co writer or not.
1:How does someone co write a story?
2:How does someone become a co writer?
3:How could I help you with your story as a co writer?
I only ask these questions because I am curious and want to know what I could be getting into. As I never co wrote anything before. If you are willing to try to work with me and answer my questions. Then I would like to be your co writer. Although I mostly get on my computer by night time around here. I thought you should know about that as it is a important detail. Anyways I wish you luck on your future stories and future chapters.
Nice job on these two chapters of yours. Even though they are kinda short, but I look forward to seeing how things go in the next chapter of this story. As for Ichigo's pairing I vote for Erza because I believe she needs someone to love her and NOT try to kill her for some stupid scheme.
I might be interested in co writing with you on this story. Now that I have a laptop to work with instead of my old hard drive computer back in a storage in North Carolina. Although I do need to know some things first before I can honestly be your co writer or not.
1:How does someone co write a story?
2:How does someone become a co writer?
3:How could I help you with your story as a co writer?
I only ask these questions because I am curious and want to know what I could be getting into. As I never co wrote anything before. If you are willing to try to work with me and answer my questions. Then I would like to be your co writer. Although I mostly get on my computer by night time around here. I thought you should know about that as it is a important detail. Anyways I wish you luck on your future stories and future chapters.