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Wow - that is *exactly* how I think it should happen on the show! Well written!
Wow - that is *exactly* how I think it should happen on the show! Well written!
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38thewizardanthedragon
OOOHHH.. goood...
I had imagined that Vance would want revenge as Gibbs had...
interesting take on who the hiring party was!
I like your description of how the hardening of Ziva's heart had crumbled..
j.
38thewizardanthedragonOOOHHH.. goood...
I had imagined that Vance would want revenge as Gibbs had...
interesting take on who the hiring party was!
I like your description of how the hardening of Ziva's heart had crumbled..
j.
1/12/2013 c1 Silverfox2159
Great story. I'm glad Gibbs was the one who took the fatal shot to Malachi.
Great story. I'm glad Gibbs was the one who took the fatal shot to Malachi.
1/12/2013 c1 1katesari
Interesting story and good!
Just not entirely sure about Ben-Gidon.
Looking forward to the next episode. And another chapter?
Was surprised to learn that they killed both Eli and Jackie Vance.
bye
1katesariInteresting story and good!
Just not entirely sure about Ben-Gidon.
Looking forward to the next episode. And another chapter?
Was surprised to learn that they killed both Eli and Jackie Vance.
bye
1/12/2013 c1 Lidil
Vengeance is mine, saith the Lord.
Leroy Jethro Gibbs as an agent of G-d.
Bears some thought, does it not?
Vengeance is mine, saith the Lord.
Leroy Jethro Gibbs as an agent of G-d.
Bears some thought, does it not?
1/12/2013 c1 3stareagle
I can see Gibbs doing this for the reasons you have stated so eloquently. Well done
3stareagleI can see Gibbs doing this for the reasons you have stated so eloquently. Well done
1/11/2013 c1 49CountessCora
You are one of the best writers here. That was superb. I enjoy all your works.
49CountessCoraYou are one of the best writers here. That was superb. I enjoy all your works.
1/11/2013 c1 50Gottahavemyncis
Very powerful, thank you. As always, Gibbs does what he needs to do for family - you are so right in that.
50GottahavemyncisVery powerful, thank you. As always, Gibbs does what he needs to do for family - you are so right in that.