
4/26/2015 c1 Guest
A few slight errors, otherwise it's fine. It was pretty good, actually.
A few slight errors, otherwise it's fine. It was pretty good, actually.
4/6/2014 c1
11MysticMewtwo
Labyrinth was the best movie EVER! I absolutely loved it, it's how I became such a David Bowie fangirl :PPPP Love this story and the pairing XD

Labyrinth was the best movie EVER! I absolutely loved it, it's how I became such a David Bowie fangirl :PPPP Love this story and the pairing XD
3/11/2014 c1 Guest
That was so cute
That was so cute
11/4/2013 c1 Guest
That was cute! This could totally work for them! LOL! Giraffe...hehehehehe...
That was cute! This could totally work for them! LOL! Giraffe...hehehehehe...
10/7/2013 c1 Sooper Mario
I liked it! I liked it a lot. Good work! This fic has just the right amount of detail. It's not too general and vague, nor is it obnoxiously describing every little thing. I was happy. I love this pairing!
I liked it! I liked it a lot. Good work! This fic has just the right amount of detail. It's not too general and vague, nor is it obnoxiously describing every little thing. I was happy. I love this pairing!
3/22/2013 c1
3Sesquipedalia
The most popular theory is that the 'tall, handsome beast' was referring to the Cat's voice actor. Not that I'm complaining or anything...
THE TWIG IN WYBIE'S HAIR IS A SMALL TREE. BEWARE THE WRATH OF THE SAPLING.
Coraline in the morning reminds me of me when I'm ticked off at someone. I'm pleasantly surprised at how apparent the sarcasm was, well, sarcasm. It's notoriously hard to convey in written works. TEACH ME YOUR WAYS, O MASTER.

The most popular theory is that the 'tall, handsome beast' was referring to the Cat's voice actor. Not that I'm complaining or anything...
THE TWIG IN WYBIE'S HAIR IS A SMALL TREE. BEWARE THE WRATH OF THE SAPLING.
Coraline in the morning reminds me of me when I'm ticked off at someone. I'm pleasantly surprised at how apparent the sarcasm was, well, sarcasm. It's notoriously hard to convey in written works. TEACH ME YOUR WAYS, O MASTER.
2/24/2013 c1
17Thegoblinqueen1998
Bog of Eternal Stank.
I love you. JS. I love labyrinth. Write stories all the time. This was cute btw. (Check out my page, you won't be sorry) :D

Bog of Eternal Stank.
I love you. JS. I love labyrinth. Write stories all the time. This was cute btw. (Check out my page, you won't be sorry) :D
2/6/2013 c1 Guest
You are hilarious! god wybie and coraline are adorable together.. but she could lighten up on him a little bit. but otherwise they are perfect together. they kinda balance each other out. 3
You are hilarious! god wybie and coraline are adorable together.. but she could lighten up on him a little bit. but otherwise they are perfect together. they kinda balance each other out. 3
2/6/2013 c1 Guest
Lol
Lol
1/24/2013 c1 Guest
:D
Get a room guys!
:D
Get a room guys!
1/21/2013 c1 MarshallLeeLuver
i love it, love, love , love, love IT! I'm soooooo happy for my cousin, Archer of Ecclesia. People love her stories. Anyways, i loved it not liked it, adn wish it wasn't a one-shot
i love it, love, love , love, love IT! I'm soooooo happy for my cousin, Archer of Ecclesia. People love her stories. Anyways, i loved it not liked it, adn wish it wasn't a one-shot