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1/13/2013 c1 2Io's Torment
A cute first chapter, it definitely makes me want more. I adore Regulus, so I hope that when you were refering to the Slytherin following Harry around, it is him. I really like your Harry to, he's lovely. Please continue writing; when I read this, and Phoenix Burning, I felt as if you enjoyed writing and you were having fun which I think shines through.
1/13/2013 c1 Tommy14
Wonderful to see a happy time during the summer with their family and friends. Nice birthday party. I laughed when Remus lost his shoes and socks to the two terrors and seeing James fall asleep at the table. I'm hoping that Harry will become friends with Regulus. Thanks for the update.
1/13/2013 c1 FatesShadow83
Lovely!
Great start!
1/13/2013 c1 3esran
a good start, kind of a slow start, but thats okay. hopefully you dont have a chapter like this for everyones party though.
1/13/2013 c1 1ClaMiAl
A good first chapter. I especially liked that bit with Regulus. Makes me wonder where he's going to end up in terms of friends and allegiance. I look forward to the next chapter!
1/13/2013 c1 2EmLights
great start! love it!
1/13/2013 c1 14Kendra Dhyanna
Este es sin duda un hermoso capítulo para comenzar la secuela, me encanta lo que has logrado montar, tu versión de una fiesta infantil mágica sin duda sorprende, el juego de los calcetines es impresionante,

He de decir que las reacciones de Regulus son encantadoras, y Sev y Remus son sencillamente dulces, y sin duda la idea de las siguientes fiestas es atractiva

Además debo decir que el resumen esta muy bien logrado, atrapa mucho la atención, deseando poder leer la historia

felicidades por un muy buen capítulo, y mis mejores deseos con esta nueva historia-secuela,

Besos

Kendra
1/13/2013 c1 1Yuki Niwa
hey love your stary and i can't wait for the next update the party sounded like fun i hope harry plays quidditch this year and i love regulus and hope harry and him become friends and kreacher i hope harry befriends him anyway love your story and i am anxiously waiting for an update
1/13/2013 c1 2Jedi Master Albus
A great first chapter to a sequel. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
1/13/2013 c1 shugokage
Great job on the first chapter and nice summmer events!
1/13/2013 c1 JessyGem
I love that he's getting to be with J&L, it always made me sad that he went through so much without them! 3 your stories! Ty for the update.
1/13/2013 c1 moriahhh
I loved it! Very sweet:)
1/13/2013 c1 12Clair Shadows
Wonderfull chapter. I love how happy Harry is overall in your stories.
1/13/2013 c1 2terfa
WOOT! I love this story, am very happy that the next year is starting now :) Can't wait for the next chapter to go up. Keep up with the great work!
1/13/2013 c1 fraewyn
Awesome!
Can't wait for the new year!
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