
1/28 c54 SuzB
Really hope that someday you will give us the epilogue to this great story. Thank you.
Really hope that someday you will give us the epilogue to this great story. Thank you.
1/23 c44 MYSTICEYES1
I THOUGHT YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB AND I DON'T KNOW ABOUT ANYONE ELSE BUT I WOULD BE THRILLED IF YOU CONTINUED ON WITH PART 2 OF YOUE STORY.
I THOUGHT YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB AND I DON'T KNOW ABOUT ANYONE ELSE BUT I WOULD BE THRILLED IF YOU CONTINUED ON WITH PART 2 OF YOUE STORY.
1/22 c54 Tina
OMG perhaps I found your story just a few days ago and I devoured it! Thank you for taking all this time to write and what a page turner it is!
I truly want a HEA for both of them, even together with Olivia. !
I would appreciate it so much. And your characters deserve a great ending. So man Fifty Shades FanFics just are stuck in the drama corner and cannot seem to get out again. I don't want it to happen with your story!
Lots of Love
Tina
OMG perhaps I found your story just a few days ago and I devoured it! Thank you for taking all this time to write and what a page turner it is!
I truly want a HEA for both of them, even together with Olivia. !
I would appreciate it so much. And your characters deserve a great ending. So man Fifty Shades FanFics just are stuck in the drama corner and cannot seem to get out again. I don't want it to happen with your story!
Lots of Love
Tina
12/17/2024 c54 djc4269
Love the way the story turned. And hopefully you will get to finish this as I'm totally invested! Please finish! Please, please, please! Hope you are well! DJC Dec 2024
Love the way the story turned. And hopefully you will get to finish this as I'm totally invested! Please finish! Please, please, please! Hope you are well! DJC Dec 2024
11/30/2024 c54 MoMeKO57
Love love love this story please continue! Was kate abused by stanton? Is her father a client
Love love love this story please continue! Was kate abused by stanton? Is her father a client
11/5/2024 c54 seagee7
OMG, WOW…This is a great storyline, and well done. I was very impressed your writing, storytelling, character development and pace of the story. This has to be one of the best stories I have read on this site. I am definitely going to read your other stories. I hope you are still writing.
OMG, WOW…This is a great storyline, and well done. I was very impressed your writing, storytelling, character development and pace of the story. This has to be one of the best stories I have read on this site. I am definitely going to read your other stories. I hope you are still writing.
8/28/2024 c54 Rosie
Please come back and give this story an ending.
Please come back and give this story an ending.
8/11/2024 c25 bookworm1404
I fucking hate that CUNT KATE KAVANAGH...There were questions about Kate being bisexual in the movie ...her kissing Ana...and now this the fucking cunt...and Elliot...he is NO loyal brother...is just a fucking manwhore that will fuck anything that moves...I can understand Christian's sense of betrayal...but he did do a bad punishment fuck on Ana...and wouldn't have done that if he truly loved her...but this is his first relationship...I think you are giving poor little Ana too much poor little me for my taste...All of the shit that Christian has been through in his life...his physical emotional sexual abuse before age 4 yrs old...being left with his dead mother for 4 days when she killed herself...then the BITCH TROLL sexually abusing Christian when he was 15 years old for 6 years beating and fucking him and initiating him into a BDSM lifestyle at 15 years old...brainwashing him...yeah Ana was dragged between husbands by her whore of a mother...but no where near the the abuse that Christian has been through I wish you would write out Kate in this story...fucking hate the cunt like I said earlier in this review.
I fucking hate that CUNT KATE KAVANAGH...There were questions about Kate being bisexual in the movie ...her kissing Ana...and now this the fucking cunt...and Elliot...he is NO loyal brother...is just a fucking manwhore that will fuck anything that moves...I can understand Christian's sense of betrayal...but he did do a bad punishment fuck on Ana...and wouldn't have done that if he truly loved her...but this is his first relationship...I think you are giving poor little Ana too much poor little me for my taste...All of the shit that Christian has been through in his life...his physical emotional sexual abuse before age 4 yrs old...being left with his dead mother for 4 days when she killed herself...then the BITCH TROLL sexually abusing Christian when he was 15 years old for 6 years beating and fucking him and initiating him into a BDSM lifestyle at 15 years old...brainwashing him...yeah Ana was dragged between husbands by her whore of a mother...but no where near the the abuse that Christian has been through I wish you would write out Kate in this story...fucking hate the cunt like I said earlier in this review.
8/11/2024 c22 bookworm1404
I think Ana cheated on Christian by kissing Jose in such a passionate way. As usual Kate was an instigator of team Jose and Ana...I hate that BITCH...she doesn't like Christian to begin with and is always sticking her nose in Ana and Christian's business...I hated Kate in the books and hate Kate in most fanfiction stories because of bitchiness and interferring in A & C relationship. Like A&C have enough drama and enemies..Jack Hyde, THE BITCH TROLL, the Sub Club, and Christian's Fifty Shades and Christian trying to get his shit together he doesn't need Kate stitch her fucking nose in his business...I wish Elliot would find a different girlfriend.
I think Ana cheated on Christian by kissing Jose in such a passionate way. As usual Kate was an instigator of team Jose and Ana...I hate that BITCH...she doesn't like Christian to begin with and is always sticking her nose in Ana and Christian's business...I hated Kate in the books and hate Kate in most fanfiction stories because of bitchiness and interferring in A & C relationship. Like A&C have enough drama and enemies..Jack Hyde, THE BITCH TROLL, the Sub Club, and Christian's Fifty Shades and Christian trying to get his shit together he doesn't need Kate stitch her fucking nose in his business...I wish Elliot would find a different girlfriend.
8/11/2024 c14 bookworm1404
OMG...little Olivia jumping into Ana lap...Ana is truly a special soul in this story...Christian is not really the bad guy like I thought earlier in my previous review...Ana was really sad that Christian and Taylor saw the video tape that fucking Jack Hyde recorded of his attach on her in New York...that jerk...I am glad that Christian bought SIP and took Ana to SIP to witness Jack Hyde being fired and Taylor kicking Jack's ass...but once Christian had seen Jack's video of Ana he understood why Ana reacted to Christian's proposition of the Red Room relationship with them...that she would have no power at all when they were in the room...Christian insisted that Ana would never be his submissive, but he was lying to himself...she would be very much his submissive in that room and that saddened Ana so much because she loved Christian and also that Christian expected Ana to trust him and tell her what Jack had done to her and yet he was unwilling to trust Ana with the information about his childhood before he was adopted and what Elena had done to him and what he had continued to do other submissives after Elena's and his relationship ended...he was so afraid that if he told her about what he did to his submissives about the canings and whippings and the humiliations that Ana would be repulsed and leave him...Christian still struggling with abandoment issues. Christian needs to trust Ana and admit that he loves her and accept Ana's love for him. I believe that Olivia will play a large role in both Ana and Christian's healing and their relationship. ..This is such a sweet story...I hated Christian at first...he is always an asshold in the beginning of these fifty shades stories...but he is just a damaged soul in need of the type of love Ana can offer him...Yeah Yeah Yeah...Love this story
OMG...little Olivia jumping into Ana lap...Ana is truly a special soul in this story...Christian is not really the bad guy like I thought earlier in my previous review...Ana was really sad that Christian and Taylor saw the video tape that fucking Jack Hyde recorded of his attach on her in New York...that jerk...I am glad that Christian bought SIP and took Ana to SIP to witness Jack Hyde being fired and Taylor kicking Jack's ass...but once Christian had seen Jack's video of Ana he understood why Ana reacted to Christian's proposition of the Red Room relationship with them...that she would have no power at all when they were in the room...Christian insisted that Ana would never be his submissive, but he was lying to himself...she would be very much his submissive in that room and that saddened Ana so much because she loved Christian and also that Christian expected Ana to trust him and tell her what Jack had done to her and yet he was unwilling to trust Ana with the information about his childhood before he was adopted and what Elena had done to him and what he had continued to do other submissives after Elena's and his relationship ended...he was so afraid that if he told her about what he did to his submissives about the canings and whippings and the humiliations that Ana would be repulsed and leave him...Christian still struggling with abandoment issues. Christian needs to trust Ana and admit that he loves her and accept Ana's love for him. I believe that Olivia will play a large role in both Ana and Christian's healing and their relationship. ..This is such a sweet story...I hated Christian at first...he is always an asshold in the beginning of these fifty shades stories...but he is just a damaged soul in need of the type of love Ana can offer him...Yeah Yeah Yeah...Love this story
8/11/2024 c7 bookworm1404
Wow ...Christian can be a total jerk in so many ways...he tells her he wants to make love to her...then he does...she gives her virginity to him and then he rolls off her and tells her this can't happen again...this unprotected sex...that he has no interest in getting her pregnant...no interest in having children...no interest in becoming a father...WHAT A FUCKING DOUCHE BAG...we know Christian is broken...but this takes the cake...then he takes her to his playroom and shows her the whips and canes and chains ...whipping bench...and tells her about the contracts and the fifteen women he has had in the Red Room of Pain...MAN ANA YOU SURE CAN PICK THEM...YOU SHOULD RUN LIKE THE WIND FROM THIS FUCKER.!CUT YOUR LOSSES...AND GET THE FUCK AWAY FROM THIS JERK! YOU WILL GET OVER HIM...BUT RUN NOW NOW NOW BEFORE YOU GET IN ANY DEEPER...HE ISN'T INTERESTED IN ANYTHING KIND OF HEALTHY RELATIONSHIP...AND YOU SO DESERVE HEALTHY! YOU HAD A GREAT FEW ORGASMS...YOU LOST YOUR VIRGINITY TO SOMEONE WHO KNEW WHAT HE WAS DOING DURING SEX...BUT THE AFTERGLOW PART...RUINED THE WHOLE EXPERIENCE FOR HER! I DON'T LIKE HIM AT THIS POINT...BUT I GUESS ALL CHRISTIANS IN ALL OF THE STORIES..FANFICTION, THE BOOKS AND MOVIES HE WAS A JERK...IN THE BOOKS AND MOVIES IT WASN'T UNTIL AFTER ANA LEFT HIM...DID HE MAKE ANY KIND OF EFFORT WITH HIS THERAPY AND THEIR RELATIONSHIP...HE HAD TO GO THROUGH THE PAIN OF LOSING HER TO GET HIS SHIT TOGETHER...SO ANA...LEAVE THE FUCKER NOW...IF HE IS GOING GET HIS SHIT TOGETHER LETS LET HIM GET TO IT...BEFORE ANA GETS HER REALLY REALLY BAD...AND DON'T YOU FUCKING DARE PUT THE BELT TO HER ASS...YOU FUCKER!
Wow ...Christian can be a total jerk in so many ways...he tells her he wants to make love to her...then he does...she gives her virginity to him and then he rolls off her and tells her this can't happen again...this unprotected sex...that he has no interest in getting her pregnant...no interest in having children...no interest in becoming a father...WHAT A FUCKING DOUCHE BAG...we know Christian is broken...but this takes the cake...then he takes her to his playroom and shows her the whips and canes and chains ...whipping bench...and tells her about the contracts and the fifteen women he has had in the Red Room of Pain...MAN ANA YOU SURE CAN PICK THEM...YOU SHOULD RUN LIKE THE WIND FROM THIS FUCKER.!CUT YOUR LOSSES...AND GET THE FUCK AWAY FROM THIS JERK! YOU WILL GET OVER HIM...BUT RUN NOW NOW NOW BEFORE YOU GET IN ANY DEEPER...HE ISN'T INTERESTED IN ANYTHING KIND OF HEALTHY RELATIONSHIP...AND YOU SO DESERVE HEALTHY! YOU HAD A GREAT FEW ORGASMS...YOU LOST YOUR VIRGINITY TO SOMEONE WHO KNEW WHAT HE WAS DOING DURING SEX...BUT THE AFTERGLOW PART...RUINED THE WHOLE EXPERIENCE FOR HER! I DON'T LIKE HIM AT THIS POINT...BUT I GUESS ALL CHRISTIANS IN ALL OF THE STORIES..FANFICTION, THE BOOKS AND MOVIES HE WAS A JERK...IN THE BOOKS AND MOVIES IT WASN'T UNTIL AFTER ANA LEFT HIM...DID HE MAKE ANY KIND OF EFFORT WITH HIS THERAPY AND THEIR RELATIONSHIP...HE HAD TO GO THROUGH THE PAIN OF LOSING HER TO GET HIS SHIT TOGETHER...SO ANA...LEAVE THE FUCKER NOW...IF HE IS GOING GET HIS SHIT TOGETHER LETS LET HIM GET TO IT...BEFORE ANA GETS HER REALLY REALLY BAD...AND DON'T YOU FUCKING DARE PUT THE BELT TO HER ASS...YOU FUCKER!
8/8/2024 c54 Kimberly Anderson1
I need more of the HEA this story was so good. I doubt at this time you will come back to it or even see this message but I loved your story so much. Thanks for sharing. I tried to find your page on FB but was unsuccessful
I need more of the HEA this story was so good. I doubt at this time you will come back to it or even see this message but I loved your story so much. Thanks for sharing. I tried to find your page on FB but was unsuccessful
5/22/2024 c41 Guest
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5/22/2024 c54 kiwihipp
Again, Ana was able to see things that the others could not see.
I loved your story and the way you allowed Ana to grow into an even stronger person.
I also liked how you changed Christian.
Not sure that I like the whole set up of Elliot and Kate anymore.
Again, Ana was able to see things that the others could not see.
I loved your story and the way you allowed Ana to grow into an even stronger person.
I also liked how you changed Christian.
Not sure that I like the whole set up of Elliot and Kate anymore.