for About Time!6/3/2020 c1 H.B.B
oh my goodness! I get it, the title of the story About Time, Toby saying "it's about time"
I been squealing so much my husband said to stifle it into the pillows of I have to,but tough with said kitty when the milk went dry I had a rotten end of work today I NEEDED the laughs and the squeals
oh my goodness! I get it, the title of the story About Time, Toby saying "it's about time"
I been squealing so much my husband said to stifle it into the pillows of I have to,but tough with said kitty when the milk went dry I had a rotten end of work today I NEEDED the laughs and the squeals
2/2/2019 c1 Guest 2019
Hopelessly romantic! Sigh...
Thanks
Hopelessly romantic! Sigh...
Thanks
4/1/2017 c1 Aeviel
I LOVE the amendments to the proposal speech. *****
I LOVE the amendments to the proposal speech. *****
6/15/2013 c1 PrncssAlynthe1st
I liked your story...it was cute and I love the ending...but I have one discrepancy that needs addressing...
Toby was like a year and a half MAYBE two years old when Sarah wished him away, at best he would be in first grade after only five years.
That's all I have to say, and as I said when starting my review - cute story, love the ending!
I liked your story...it was cute and I love the ending...but I have one discrepancy that needs addressing...
Toby was like a year and a half MAYBE two years old when Sarah wished him away, at best he would be in first grade after only five years.
That's all I have to say, and as I said when starting my review - cute story, love the ending!
3/18/2013 c1 JarethLover
Loved this.
Loved this.
1/31/2013 c1 Baruga
Don't bold your whole story, it makes it a bit harder on the eyes. Maybe bold the title and A/Ns but not the story.
Just my opinion.
Good story.
Don't bold your whole story, it makes it a bit harder on the eyes. Maybe bold the title and A/Ns but not the story.
Just my opinion.
Good story.
1/20/2013 c1 
14Princess Twila
...I thought Toby was a baby when he was wished away by Sarah, not a 5-year-old boy...and did Sarah's hairdo change halfway through the story? Her hair was down and tumbling free down her back in the first exchange, and then suddenly up in a french twist in the second exchange. Were they two different dances with two different obnoxious dates, or were they the same one?
And good job with the story, btw ;)
14Princess Twila...I thought Toby was a baby when he was wished away by Sarah, not a 5-year-old boy...and did Sarah's hairdo change halfway through the story? Her hair was down and tumbling free down her back in the first exchange, and then suddenly up in a french twist in the second exchange. Were they two different dances with two different obnoxious dates, or were they the same one?
And good job with the story, btw ;)
1/16/2013 c1 NuPreacher
Just so you know, your beta missed a word. inpatients is spelled impatience.
Just so you know, your beta missed a word. inpatients is spelled impatience.
1/16/2013 c1 Guest
IS JARITH A VAMPIRE!? HE SPARKLES IN CLOUDS OF GLITTER!
IS JARITH A VAMPIRE!? HE SPARKLES IN CLOUDS OF GLITTER!